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Damn, no matter how upset you are; never get so drunk that you don't know where you are and who you are with...
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Unresolved feelings come out in the damnedest ways. The level of feeling is plan for all to see except the two of them. Paul is going to continue to be an issue; until he either hurts someone or hurts himself. WOW...
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This was a sweet chapter, maybe Ember can realize that people do change. HIs exchange with Pix also should tell him not to judge a book by it's cover. Keep up the great work, can't wait to see what is next.
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So delicious, can't wait to see where you go with this next.
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Well, let's hope that his brother has changed as much as he has, ie. growing up, maturing, etc... I am glad that they are all staying positive in front of the kids, and yes, 17/18 is still a kid.
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Lord, are you sure you are not on break from writing for one of the Mexican or South American telenovelas?
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Desperation makes strange bedfellows... Can't wait to see what happens when he gets the job...
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I think the farther in the past the wrong was; the harder it is just to let go of it and move on. Well written and the pacing was spot on.
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Well, writing is excellent; and this reunion is just as horrible as what I have always imagined all of mine were. Can't wait to see how Ricky and Brady take each others news; plus what the hell is November going to think when he finds out.
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Interesting start to the story; and I completely understand his reaction; way past 20th year reunion and still have not been to one of my High School reunions...
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Trash Talking and Walking
centexhairysub commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Trash Talking and Walking
Horrified and upset on way to many levels to even discuss this chapter right now. The writing was excellent but just so upset...- 47 comments
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Well, you are right, I did not see t his ending coming at all nor that it would be this soon. Have to say how much I have enjoyed this story from start to finish. The writing, plotting, and characterization have all been first rate. I agree with Farla that the people of Earth would never have come together in time to save ourselves, I personally believe that one day, maybe not in my lifetime, the human race will wake up to realize that it has managed to extinct itself. Would love to have a book two and see what happens as the family and friends of our unchanged adjusted to coming back. Bravo...
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Loved this chapter, so much going on. Sebby and Torsten went physical; then Araziah went physical with Torsten as well, although we don't know how far, yet. I have a feeling that what Torsten found in his grandfather's journals may prove to be crucial. Another pretender handled, but with the death of his sister the other sister and the Grey Prince will be out for blood; not because of orders but because of revenge. Well done, can't wait for the next update.
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Chapter 11 - The Dawn of Day
centexhairysub commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Chapter 11 - The Dawn of Day
This was an exceptional chapter; the emotions and real horror when the child was shot was gut wrenching. The humans have come to realize that although the Aryaka took their ship; they are the aggrieved. No matter what species, race, or whatever; the primal anger at seeing a child harmed is universal. Just so well done, can't wait for the next chapter. -
Great chapter, the action was superb. The writing the last few chapters have just been excellent. The emotions and real terror in this chapter have been conveyed so well. I worry about burying the creature with all of its parts so close together. I don't suppose it could re-animate, but I personally would not have taken the chance, although I do understand the reaction of those involved.
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Sorry, I am really pissed at Donovan and completely team Shane on this one. The very fact that Donovan doesn't seem to realize what he did wrong really surprises me since Dr. David basically spelled it out. Excellent writing, but a really annoying chapter for me...
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Like the others; I think Gene's death has been the hardest to deal with at least for me. There have been so many good things; that naming just one probably isn't possible, but the shower scene in the first part was on up there... I want the last book to be at least 100 chapters, maybe 200. I want it filled with epic battles, lots of passion, and a little romance would not hurt either. I want what you always give us; a great story, told in your voice...
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This new action worries me; I mean he was scary enough when you sort of thought the monster was semi-mindless or at least acting with an animal brain, but this is showing more thought and creativity. I am afraid they are going to lose someone and I will be heartbroken. All of them have come to mean something to me; a real testament to your writing ability.
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This bitch just needs to go ahead and die; and there is no way that she should be allowed to breed again. The antichrist might well prove to be a girl.
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I am starting to think that there is nothing wrong in the twins lives that a couple of bullets would not fix. Surprised that Ben has been out of site this long.
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This is one seriously f&%^$d up family. I am not sure that Drew or anyone can help them, he may save the twins from themselves and others; but not sure he can truly SAVE them.
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I think that is what happened to Aria's last bodyguard, Ben keeps making sure there is so much turnover that no one realizes that he is up to something.
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Have to wonder what Amara's issue is, what happened in the past that cause his reaction to Drew; and how does Ben fit into it? Aria is made of sterner stuff then I think even he realizes but I think that having Drew around will be good for him.
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Glad to see that I am not the only one that has issues with Ben, Carl is a genius. LOL. Good chapter, really moved the story along and got to see another side to everyone.
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This chapter was a true delight and a revelation as well. I have a feeling that everything that Drew thought he knew about both boys but especially Aria has no basis in reality. The writing pulled on so many different emotions but did so with a subtlety that I was not expecting, truly well done.
