JCtoGO2
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Great Chapter. They just keep getting better and better.
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Thanks you for a great last chapter bringing it all to a conclusion. The entire story was great.
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Ok, you have finally done it - tears. I have experienced many emotions so far during these 24 chapters but not a tear until this chapter. Well done. They just keep getting better and better.
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I agree with everything jay salmon said except going to the hospital. I don’t think I could have said no to his mother. This was a great chapter and well written. You know how to tell a good story.
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Another fantastic chapter. Thank you for writing it. It is obvious you put your heart and soul in it. BRAVO!
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What flesco said...Awesome chapter.
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BRAVO! What an incredible chapter. Again, I was hesitant to start it because of its length but once started I could not stop. There are many great writers on this website but from my perspective, you are a truly great author. Bring on the next chapter!
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Another great chapter. For the first part, I thought we were going to have a nice feel good chapter for as change but as always not to be. Danger lurks. Again great writing. Can’t wait for the next one.
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Excellent chapter. Then again, they all are. You are nicely building the confrontation with each chapter. As I said previously, I now look forward to each chapter and set aside time to enjoy it completely.
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Another incredible chapter! When I first started reading this story, I was hesitant because of the long chapters. Now I can not wait for the next one. Great character development and an ever changing plot. Bravo!
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Sorry I missed that
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Great start.
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Looking forward to Devon Carlton's future adventures
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Devon needs mental help. All the things Edgar did for Devon while he was in the hospital, basically saving his life, and other direct activities to Devon’s benefit, and he won’t even talk to Edgar.
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Excellent chapter. The story just keeps getting better and better
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Bravo
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I see the story is marked complete. It felt like a great chapter one with good character development. It would be nice to see you develop this story into two or more chapters. Anyway my thoughts. It was a good read. You have talent.
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Great story and character development, as usual
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Great writing. Great Story.
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Brilliant writing. Nothing else needs to be said.
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Wow! I don't know what to say other than well done. Look forward to the next chapter.
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I hope you feel 100% soon. From a selfish viewpoint, we need you healthy so you can get us chapters sooner -ha,ha. Seriously a great chapter as usual.
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Good story but the ending sure was abrupt.
