JCtoGO2
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An excellent Chapter. The story just keeps getting better and better.
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This story has sure taken a different direction than I initially thought. So far the ring , the money and house are not going as I thought it initially might. Don’t get me wrong, I love the story. Just a little surprised.
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A great opening chapter. You are a great story teller and I look forward to the coming chapters.
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A really great story and a lousy ending. At least real epilogue would have been nice. But that is just my opinion and as I said a great 35 chapters
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Good chapter. Things are moving along smoothly. I keep waiting for something bad to happen but maybe Apollo will insure nothing bad occurs.
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Wow, not only the start of a new story with old friends , but also a cliff hanger. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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I like the more frequent updates. It give me something to look forward to. Ultimately we will all be fine , whatever works best for you
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Great chapter. You are doing a fantastic job of creating the characters and putting us right in the middle of the story. Can’t wait until the next chapter.
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Great Chapter. Sorry it took many drafts but the final chapter was well worth it. Looking forward to future chapters.
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Excellent Chapter. As said before you are a great story teller. The fight and the way you wrote it, again proved my point. As drsawzall said, " did not see that coming". I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Great Chapter. You continue, in my opinion, to be a great story teller. By that I mean you get people and their emotions involved with your chapters.
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Great chapter. It’s an amazing and interesting story. I hope to read the next chapter soon.
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HAVE YOU LOST SOMETHING?
JCtoGO2 commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in HAVE YOU LOST SOMETHING?
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Great chapter. I hope this story will inspire someone who is able to help street kids in their area.
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Wow, just wow! This is a great chapter. It is one of the most emotional chapters I have read. The next can’t come soon enough.
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Thank you and Aditus for creating the journey. With everything going on, I'm still not totally in the Holiday spirit but your stories each day have been a nice way to work towards it. Thank you both again.
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A great chapter. My emotions ranged from love to hate.- love for how the boy was treated to hate for a person who could do such a despicable thing.
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Great start. I’m looking forward to the next adventure.
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I believe you did honor Charles Dickens with your version of A Christmas Carol. I'm older and have viewed the time when, especially in the South sodomy laws against gays were prosecuted and a time when gay marriage was unlawful. We have come a long way since then but have a great deal further to go. Your story should remind us of that. Thank you for a well written story.
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I’ve been a reader of great stories on this website for many years. I have never enjoyed a chapter more than this one. You had us run the gamut of emotions. As others have said Sunday won’t be the same.
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This is a great story so far. I'll be interested to see the direction it takes. There are several possible directions or maybe a surprise direction?
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If this is your first short story - BRAVO. I can’t wait to see your next. You have a way with words to create vivid characters and spin a story to keep a readers attention. I enjoyed it very much and look forward to your future creations.
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I've read many well written stories on Gay Authors. This is one of the best. The action, character development and pacing are fantastic. I really am looking forward to part 2
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Wow! I didn't see that coming.
