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Interesting developments, I can wait to see how this all works out. Great chapter.
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Awesome chapter. Thanks for remembering those that have given their all for this country.
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This was a very good story. It was well written and I was anxiously waiting for every Chapter. Sad to see the story end but happy it ended the way it did.
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A great story. Well written. I hate to see it end.
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I totally disagree with the above. That Chapter was necessary, especially the section with the parents, school and his sister. From my perspective a great chapter and looking for more.
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Great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
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Brilliant writing. Outstanding Chapter. Enough said.
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Interesting chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
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Brilliant, captivating writing. I can not wait for the next chapter. BRAVO.
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Terrific story. I agree with RCCROBO that I'm sorry to see it end. However you said you are already working on your next story so I will wait patiently for it to start ( or maybe not so patiently)!
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A wonderful well written chapter. I look forward to the future and what will happen with Will and Oskar
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A great story from beginning to the end. You definitely picked the right ending. I can't wait for your next literary effort.
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WOW, well written! I actually felt like I was in the meeting. I agree with others on the government being a problem.
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Fifth Interlude - Vengeance
JCtoGO2 commented on Jason MH's story chapter in Fifth Interlude - Vengeance
I've said it before and I'll say it again, you are one of if not the best author on GA. This was an unbelievable chapter. I read it and had to immediately read it again. -
Interesting Chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing what direction the story takes next.
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Comments may not be necessary but you should hear from readers what an excellent two chapters these were -laughter and tears. Great writing.
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I enjoyed the story. I thought the bringing back of Sebastin was rushed. It only took 7 short paragraphs. Having said that, it was a great story and look forward to future ones by an outstanding writer.
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A great chapter that left you feeling very good.
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Lewis is Lewis. I doubt he will ever change. This was a nice change of pace from the last chapter killing off Sebastian. I'm not sure I will ever forgive you for that.😉
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A great story, well written. If this was your first suspense story, I can't wait until the next. I've said it before you are a great writer with super talent.
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A great chapter filing in some important background information. I agree with Lex when he tells Ian " Although when you say it, it seems a little mundane" Looking forward to see if Lex gets courage to act on his much delayed plan of seeing his father.
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I'm really going to be sorry to see this story end. It was another excellent chapter.
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One of the best, if not the best, chapters I've read on GA.
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What mfa607 said. Amazing!
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I agree with Chris 191070. A great start to the story.
