Daddydavek
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Thanks for the review. Abel III is quite the young man and I hope his story continues to fascinate!
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I'd like to add my congratulations and best wishes to all the fathers and those who have acted as fathers to youngsters.
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Fun times in London and lo and behold, Mr. Arbour has figured a way to bring a Granger into the story. While back in CA, we get reintroduced to Sergio (aka Kevin) and Brad finds him hotter than ever. Somehow I think the fun times are over and the fireworks at Jackies' party add up to more interesting times. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Chapter 6 Assessing Problems December 26, 2733 After an early breakfast the next morning and after the noisy departure of the Browns as well as most of the crew on shore leave, we convened in grandfather's cabin to strategize. I shared with them what Hal had provided me on the almost 400 tagged as needing immediate investigation. It seemed that a majority of them represented families that were involved in ship construction and refitting or families also heavily involved in shipping, in
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Having no internet or phone service in this day and age is not acceptable in a modern resort, no matter the location, unless you are specifically looking for one without those amenities. The stuff stolen from your suitcase reinforces the rule to never take things on vacation that you cannot do without. Lost luggage overseas happens more often than people realize. We're just glad to get you back and hoping you have some pictures to post to show off that fabulous view!
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Chapter 5 Meeting the Browns
Daddydavek commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 5 Meeting the Browns
Thanks Addy! I think there are more than a few surprises coming. -
I too continue to be amazed that Caroline continues to avoid talking to George about Treadway. That she is actually letting him embark on the voyage without telling him really makes me wonder: Does she expect Treadway to tell George? The party was neat and that it was modeled on an actual historical event made it nicer. More, please!
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Well that theory does explain a lot! More please!
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Yup! My daughter said she was bringing some gooey butter cake for breakfast too!
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I enjoyed the chapter filled with good feelings and camaraderie. After what these people have been through, having a normal party without a lot of drama sounds like a good time. At least Brad certainly had one and so did Sean. Matt and Wade are getting to a better place and I suspect that Will and Marie at the society ball will be the outstanding young couple there. Wade got talked into going to Europe and that means poor Zach will be the only one not completely at home in using the French language. That Stef is going to join them when they get to France was expected, but that Brad may now join them sounds like the party is moving to Paris! I hope Mr. Arbour has several more chapters ready and keeps shooting them out at the current rate!!!
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
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Wow, something else to look forward to besides barbecued pork steaks!
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Chapter 5 Meeting the Browns
Daddydavek commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 5 Meeting the Browns
I have four brothers and am not close to any of them. One of my best friends and his brother are like the cousins. Except they don't sleep together. They both have families and are in business together. I used them to model the cousins. -
Chapter 5 Meeting the Browns
Daddydavek commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 5 Meeting the Browns
Thanks for your kind words! I am so glad that you like my story. I hope I can continue to hold your interest! -
We, the jury, find the defendant...
Daddydavek commented on K.C.'s story chapter in We, the jury, find the defendant...
Loved the verdict and the civil suit that tied up all the bastard's assets! Great chapter! -
Chapter 5 Meeting the Browns
Daddydavek commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Chapter 5 Meeting the Browns
Thanks! The cousins are certainly a lot more uninhibited than Abel III, but he is becoming a bit more adventurous. -
I'm glad you are enjoying the story and thanks for your kind words.
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Chapter 5 Meeting the Browns I awakened the next morning feeling better than I could ever remember. I felt like my ability had finally settled and become completely integrated. I was mentally wired and up for any task. I contacted Hal and asked for an update and he provided telepathically a trove of data on each of the almost four hundred I identified as true threats. He also told me the Browns would be arriving in about an hour. With that news, I headed to the facilities, did my business and
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Happy Birthday!
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Thanks for the update and best wishes for you and your BF!
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Yuri is making good progress and I want more!
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Hugs Billy! I think you have to give yourself some time. The shock and sense of loss is a bit overpowering right now and it's almost too much to consider. I lost my dad at age fifteen and it took me forever to really grieve and have a good cry. I was just sort of numb and worse I felt responsible. My point is, that we all grieve at our own pace and the more serious the loss, the longer it may take. One suggestion, when something reminds you of your mother, don't push it away. Remember her with all the love and care you can. Especially remember the good times and her favorite things. She will always be a part of you and wants you to be happy and successful!
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Still not sure where this is going.
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Wow, what another great review! Keep them coming! Like life, sometimes things are not immediately clear or explained and sometimes things seem to happen all at once and at other times nothing much seems to happen. So I hope you will stick with me and the story to see how it develops. Thanks again!
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Wow, what a great review. You raise many of the questions I had when I was trying to put the story together. Most will be answered eventually. As for as the pace of this chapter, I slowed it down intentionally as I was trying to convey the immensity of processing everything he received. I hope it worked to some extent.
