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Daddydavek

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  1. The end of the story confirms that despite several periods of trials and tribulations, Nathan and Brohm lucked out in the end. Thanks for the ride, albeit a bumpy one.
  2. Daddydavek

    Chapter 24

    Rom's recovering may have secured the PM's support. Nathan has made some friends and his electric eyesight may come in handy.
  3. Daddydavek

    Visitors

    Happy 4/20! JJ, Kris and the folks met and played mostly nice. Travis and Will bitch and fight and make-up and are contemplating a threesome.. Still waiting for school to start.
  4. Improbably, Nathan made it out of town. Now they must retrieve the gear Brohm hid and the forest and make their way to Morgana. What could go wrong?
  5. I first read Comsie on Nifty in the '90's. He wrote well then and his writing just got better with practice. On GA, I continued to read his story and his advice blogs. He always seemed so willing to share his time and talent of which it seemed was endless. And so now there is a void and he will be missed and remembered. RIP Comicality.
  6. Nathan is well past the stage where most men would welcome death, yet he struggles onward. Brohm showing up means they are on the run again, and we know how well that has worked in the past....
  7. Daddydavek

    Chapter 23

    Power eyes! And a 96 page report too! Being Nathan's friend is going to help the cause. More please!
  8. Nathan seems to be lucky(?) to have survived. With Helmsley dead, who knows what this Garricus will do?
  9. I suspect Chalmers will end up being the scapegoat that he richly deserves to be. St. Vincent is more concerned about appearances than anything else and believes he is well shielded in his position. However, should the king demand his retirement, could he refuse? George is nothing if not resourceful and has managed to deal with Talleyrand, the Russian Sovereign and his own, so I expect he will work his magic here too. Calvert indeed must seduce a princess...
  10. Will can at times overthink everything. First he wanted Travis to reach out to his sister and spent quite some time thinking and discussing it, but when he read her e-mail to Travis, he quickly saw how shallow she was. J is going to be ok, at least I think so. Still waiting for school to start (and I'm guessing Mark is waiting for the current semester to end!).
  11. Whether real or a nightmare, still very sad.
  12. Some great selections, but I wish @Renee Stevens would get back in the saddle and write a full blown Western rom-com!
  13. Daddydavek

    Chapter 22

    "Maybe ... Corey knows their thinking best. We'll see what he says." There was silence for a while. I'm hoping the demonstration doesn't end as a catastrophe....
  14. It looks like they found the amulet, but Nathan's nightmare came to be partially true. They are stuck in the dark and we are left wondering what's next?
  15. Daddydavek

    Chapter Twenty

    The haunted keep and it's awful end are locked in the past, and I fear the amulet holds the key.
  16. Their luck or lack thereof seems to continue, but what next?
  17. "After a few moments Nyle appeared, dashing down the road and into one of the narrow alleyways." To get their supplies or the local garrison?
  18. Daddydavek

    Chapter 21

    I'm also wondering about the back story on the unknown guard who had a medical incident... I loved the chapter!
  19. Well that cancels their trip into town and their presence in the area will soon become known. Somehow if they make it to the ruins of the haunted castle, they will find more trouble there. Finally, if their faces were magically changed, how was Brohm recognized?
  20. Daddydavek

    An Ass Kicking

    My comment in the last chapter was that Will was acting like an entitled prick and then Mark throws a mugging on Will and he has to use the swat line. Then Travis shows up and Will is in heaven. Somehow Will and Travis are good for each other and I hope it lasts awhile. Will calls JJ to warn of the visit and JJ panics and Will somehow calms him down as he knows JJ better than JJ himself. Looking forward to more. Also when they finally get into school....
  21. Daddydavek

    Chapter Sixteen

    We found out the ring was the source of the nightmares, but the cursed bog was almost their undoing until the intervention of Morgana. The first part of the chapter painted a picture so bleak that it was almost painful to read. I was on my tablet...sorry!
  22. Daddydavek

    Chapter Sixteen

    We found out the ring was the source of the nightmares, but the cursed bog was almost their undoing until the intervention of Morgana. The first part of the chapter painted a picture so bleak that it was almost painful to read.
  23. Lots of good stories!
  24. Daddydavek

    Chapter 20

    It does appear they may be moving faster than prudence might dictate.
  25. Daddydavek

    Chapter Fifteen

    The two travelers and fugitives are getting to know each other's private thoughts included. The nightmares seem to be a curse and I am also wondering if they were inflicted by the Hemsley's wizard?
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