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Whinny too?
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I'm surprised neither Travis or Will didn't reach out to Zach for information? Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Who killed Curtis Buck? - PART II
Daddydavek replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Topics
While I voted for suicide in the first poll, I've changed my mind. Curtis was too narcissistic to kill himself. I'm changing to Taylor who was my backup choice. Her melt down and hospitalization are part of her manipulation. -
Thanks for sharing your story! It captivated me. I guess I'm getting more comfortable with the shifter genre.
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Excuse me! I noted a cliffie at the end!?
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Glad to see them heal Pegged without upsetting Michael. Michael may become an adjunct member of the group!
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Bravo to a frightfully exciting chapter!
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Another fun filled chapter with a cliff hanger. Suicide or patricide by Taylor are my guesses, but Miranda cannot be ruled out either. Definitely not Jake or Travis, and I think it unlikely that Big did it. Brad, Steff, and the rest of Will's family are also unlikely as they take time to plan things out before putting it in action.
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Suicide is my guess, but Taylor is my standby pick.
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This chapter successfully showed the preparation and the unrelenting t e n s i o n waiting for the battle. Well done!
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Another chapter that went amazingly well. Thanks for sharing!
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Well that went well. Except for Andre's single status. Perhaps the next chapter can resolve the problem.
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Andre and Calvin are two more to add to the mix. I'm guessing Andre plays for Chris' team but that is to be determined.
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How very mature of them all! Why do I think that won't last?
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Chapter 1 - An Accidental Meeting
Daddydavek commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 1 - An Accidental Meeting
Not sure how Beau knew Chris might agree to give him a blow job, but it was interesting that he wanted Chris to get naked too...and then wanted to see him come. Beau then took a taste of Chris' come. Since there are more chapters, I'm guessing Beau didn't keep his word. -
I wonder if Sebastion's local National Guard unit armory has any spare flame throwers?
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Travis' and Big's brotherly dynamic is changing. The rocks and rare earth could provide a business opportunity. The fact that Miranda's conquests included Darius was only somewhat surprising given her history. Taylor is something else and will need counselling even more than Travis. I'm still worried that Curtis is a loose canon.
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Asa still doesn't know how he was captured. Without that, how can he defend against it? Nor why Caleb was missed!
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It is a complicated web of a tale, which even has a mention of earworm concerning the chant. Why do I suspect the crew is underestimating the lengths the "evildoers" will go to?
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I'm still wondering how Huntington managed to capture Asa and missed Caleb, or if failing to get Caleb was intentional? I'm also wondering about Huntington having a source in the castle. I haven't read all the comments, but I suspect the Vampire. I'm hoping one of Huntington's cohorts screws up and gives Asa a chance to escape... I still think it will take more than Sebastion and perhaps Giles' pack to handle Huntington....
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I probably wouldn't get past the first two chapters... I feel that there is so much out there that I haven't read, that I can't take the time to wade through the banal to get to the better part.
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I hoped we would get to see the letter and was glad we got to read it. Now I wonder if the other copy Travis had Will make is for Jake and Brad? Looking forward to the interactions with Big. I'm also worried that the guys take security seriously as Curtis is an outraged jealous S.O.B!
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Asa is captured and confined to a cell with no light by the man whom they wanted to scout. In addition he has no clue as to how Caleb has fared. I'm hoping the next chapter brings some hope!
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On a busy weekend, I finally got through this chapter in which the other realm magic made the gathering unforgettable! Well done!
