Daddydavek
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Whoa! Beyond Kink. Intense. If this is the penultimate chapter, (which blew me away) I can't imagine what surprises will occur in the finale! Perhaps, some foreshadowing of the next book in the saga?
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I love this series and the main characters. It will be interesting to see how Mark spins the tale regarding the naval battle at St. Vincent where the Brits fleet led by Jervis were overwhelmingly out-numbered and Commodore Nelson makes his mark.
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Chapter 6 - Gentlemen Always Carry Cards
Daddydavek commented on Jack Scribe's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Gentlemen Always Carry Cards
"amuse-bouche" Interesting term which sent me to dictionary.com. I like these characters and your story. Of course, I've liked most of your stories and this one seems like it has some legs. -
Smashing to have George back in the saddle after a dip in the pool!
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Interesting nuggets about early radar used aboard ships and it's limitations. The personal story line is reminiscent of some other albeit earlier wartime stories between the English and the Jerries. "All quiet on the western front" comes to mind. In the current turbulent times, when there is so much incivility in the world and intolerance, it is important to remember that even our adversaries are people. Now if I could just remember that when I am confronted by tea partiers, other members of the far right and intolerant bigots in general.
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This is a doozie! Fast paced, riveting and confrontational. It ends with Stef diffusing the situation between Brad and J.P. in his famous style. I loved every word of it. Oh, and there is a reference to a little potential kink as well that acts as a bridge between two different scenes. Neat!
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I read this chapter and must admit I found it riveting and nasty. Brad is a bit, but just a bit more vindictive than I thought. I always believed he could play hard ball, but his plans for Brian to take the blame for the leaked video, knowing the probable outcome is truly consistent with the adage: "Payback [revenge or vengance] is a dish best served cold." This is as coldly calculating payback as ever described. JP will be more than a little uncomfortable.
