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Chapter 20 - And Thanksgiving was Around the Corner
Daddydavek commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 20 - And Thanksgiving was Around the Corner
Nice chapter. I like Scott more all the time, especially the way he thinks fast on his feet to ease a potentially awkward social situation. I can't wait to see how Thanksgiving goes. -
I think both Will and Gathan would top someone who is HIV positive if they cared for the person and took precautions. Even in 2000, having a postive HIV status was no longer a death sentence. Also, being young, and invincible and fairly intelligent, but terminally horney, they would know the risks and ways to minimize the chance of acquiring an infection. In the current story, does Will really know for sure that Berto is not HIV positive? Even if someone has been recently tested, no one is absolutely sure unless they have been celibate and had what, 2-3 of months of testing which is negative. Ever since the AIDS era started, sex has been a crapshoot and most gay guys either calculate the odds, remain monogamous, or make the best decisions they can on the information available.
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Interesting chapter, but it really didn't move the story along. So many loose ends, questions, mysteries, intrigues, just on under-boil while we wait. Wait for Trev to find out the momentous thing his father will reveal; wait for the evil witch and dirty cop to frame his friends; wait for the cop and P.I. to figure something out; wait for the errant journalist spying on his boat to come up with another piece of the puzzle; wait for the drug goon to find out something and sic his dogs on Trevor; etc. etc. etc.
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I just wonder if for background, Mark read the Full text of "Horatio Nelson and the Naval Supremacy of England"? It gives dates, battles and insight into the thoughts of the man. My source on the internet was at: http://www.archive.org/details/horationelsonand017530mbp If you search the document in your browser for Elba and/or St. Vincent you will get to pertinent parts for some background. From my scant research, I think Mark does a great job of incorporating historical references and follows the time line pretty well. Without a real sailing background, it is still unimaginable to me how all these sailors fit on these comparatively small ships. If you have ever been to Boston Harbor (Old Ironsides or the USS Constituion) or Baltimore Harbor (USS Constellation) and actually got on and toured one of the old sailing ships, you know what I mean.
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Chapter 19 - Filling in the Blanks
Daddydavek commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 19 - Filling in the Blanks
Way to go Tonya! Rick Jr.'s mom protected her cub and informed his dad how things were gonna' be. Charlie's family is even better than they thought. Charlie's mom wants to know and Charlie told them he was taking it slow. Perfect! I loved this chapter. I think the comment about swimming missed the connection to Wade's hands. For a guy who has probably swum 5-6 hours a day, everyday, anything (like a cast) that keeps him out of the water will certainly affect his time and it's all about his time! -
Well, I see Will did get the Italian tickler and now wonders if it will get better and better or remain just okay; which again, is a rather mature thought for a young gay teen. The Zach storyline has me wondering if he really will develop into a more troublesome pain in the butt? Finally, it looks like we will get to J.P.'s surgery and get some idea of the post-op treatment and prognosis.
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"There was no telling what dawn would bring, and what new challenge would lie on th " Looks like part of the last sentence failed to copy into the post. Or, is it a tease. I suspect you will finish it as 'lie on the morrow.' If you were using more period English, but since you are not, I would change it to 'lie on the horizon.' At any rate, that is small potatoes in another first rate chapter filled with action and more personal loss.
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Ready thru the four chapters yho have up and am enjoying your story of inter-species relations among 3 hot gay guys. The threesome was awesome. As for plot, it seems likely that several pieces of the puzzle are missing. If there was a hush-hush cover story to get Shade to get the Vamp Mac, then Maggie wouldn't have heard what she heard in her little saloon. That was too convenient. Hopefully, the sudden run actually gives them sometime to put their big heads together and brainstorm over what is going down. Of course, I expect the littler heads to get together as well.
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...For Every Person I Hurt, I Hurt That Much More Inside
Daddydavek commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ...For Every Person I Hurt, I Hurt That Much More Inside
These guys have been friends for more than 20 years. Coop was filled in by Spence about things from Kyle's perspective. Coop dealt with Sebastion. It was just barely believable. Spence as Kyle's best and longest friend seems like he would have been harder on Coop. Sebastion, was harder, but with Devon actually having just been there, not as much as I expected. Coop still hasn't talked again to Kyle, his friend, former lover, and lawyer, not even to discuss divorce strategy??? The story is progessing smoothly, with just minor hiccups and tears from his daughter and some support from his son. All just a little too pat. When marriages crumble, people get hit with falling brickbats as emotions spill out of control. Things spiral and the nitty-gritty is usually not pretty. Most of us have seen friends go through divorces. Some even in this very situation. The angst is palpable in real life, dealing with kids who are confused and even perhaps ashamed in this era when children are very opinionated and not afraid to voice their emotions and anger can be quite harsh. I like the story, but somehow it lacks the drama and emotion I would expect from this plot-line. But keep it coming, I'm sure you will fill in the blanks. -
The Calfornia Dream Is Fizzling Out
Daddydavek replied to methodwriter85's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
Jeremy look at this link: http://www.mysanantonio.com/news/article/Texas-drought-lowered-lake-levels-by-4-in-June-1461421.phphttp:/www.mysanantonio.com/news/article/Texas-drought-lowered-lake-levels-by-4-in-June-1461421.php Texas is facing an epic drought, so it is not the land of "milk and honey" either, although it has weathered the Great Recession better than most states. -
NO skipping over stuff allowed, despite Private Tim's comments. I am enjoying this dual tracked story too much! Names in the last 25 years have gotten really individualized, especially among the younger folk. I have seen so many weird spellings and unusual names that I am astounded to meet a young person named Mike, Bill, Dave, Bob, Tom, Dick or Harry; not to mention, Betty, Sue or Mary! My only critique is that Will's portrayal seems more like a 16-17 year old than an early teen.
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A very fast read, like most of Mark's chapters. Kristin is in an uncomfortable place and therefore so is Gathan. Zach is smarmy (I love that term!) Will is still having experiences more appropriate for a 17-18 year old and responding about that way too. Berto's endowment on the small side of average may be just the Italian 'tickler' to intiate Will into the joys of bottoming, or not!
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Now replete from another banquet on sailing, George finds himself still missing Travers and worrying about Cavendish et al. Seems like he takes on a lot. Not mentioned is his ongoing concern about his own family and the outcome of their maneuvers. Seems like there are plenty of loose ends to tidy up before the major battle scene.
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Revenge is a dish best served cold and I believe our dear hero just served it up to the big headed witch of a sister. Of course she probably will figure it out that he will not really carry through with his threat and there goes that, but the moment was sweet.
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Lemme see, problems with derivatives in math, big haired girls everywhere, and snobs who don't play nice. Home schooling sounds more practical all the time.
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...I Always Felt Like I Knew What I Was Doing.
Daddydavek commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ...I Always Felt Like I Knew What I Was Doing.
Sojourn is a bit over the top in his review but in general I find I am somewhat in agreement with him. For a grown-up with responsibilities, who was dumped 20 years ago, Coop is f**c{& nuts. Devon is not without blame but Coop is editing "The List" and he falls into his old ways like putting on an old jockstrap! Even if he thinks he can go back and things will be like they were, reality never works that way. In real life, not just his lawyer, but Spence, and Sebastion would desert him over this too. -
Did you ever jack off with your brother?
Daddydavek replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
My older brother was just a couple years older. My younger brothers who walked in unexpectedly were 5 and more years younger! So I agree with you on this too! -
I agree with CentexHS. Before it became a life or death issue and the worst case consequence was a dose of gonorrhea, opportunistic cruising was way more common and acceptable. Casual hook-ups were just that. Most of us didn't discuss them much and for some of us in the closet, that was our main outlet. Since the 1980's when HIV became a serious problem, slutty behavior is a no-no for most adults as it implies recklessness.
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Did you ever jack off with your brother?
Daddydavek replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
I'm one of 7 children. I have an older brother and 3 younger brothers. Of course I walked in on my older brother beating off, more than once (we shared a bedroom) and when I got old enough, I did join him a couple of times. We did compare dicks. He is circumcised and I am not. When I was older, a couple of my younger brothers walked in on me just as I was cumming. The older one was 11 and the younger one was 9. Talk about embarrassing! NO they did not join me and I was a lot more careful after that. -
It’s Your Life: It’s never too late.
Daddydavek commented on J_C_Lawrence's story chapter in It’s Your Life: It’s never too late.
Oh gosh, way too much gush and pity poor me. I got as far as the spiel about his boss and after the third paragraph or so going on about a yellow turtleneck and some lame designer, I had to call it quits. My advice is tighten it up, condense, distill and then do some more. -
I'll bottom for a really caring and sensitive top. I'll top for a really involved and sensitive bottom. For anything else, 69 is nice:)
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Since Will is over-endowed for his age and Berto is hot Italian with a teenie weenie, it could be interesting; especially if Rico is right and Berto can't take Will. Sounds like a vacation fling only. Funny, no mention of the sultry July weather! Gathan's conversation with Wally was interesting and seems to confirm that he is moving on. Kristen has to deal with parents who could have lost their daughter. Perhaps, going to different Universities will be a good thing from her parent's point of view. Darius is a twerp. His comment about hiring a boyfriend was catty.
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This chapter provides much to chew on. The PI and the detective still haven't figured out that the wicked witch is a drug runner despite how her boat is protected?? Joel is starting to figure somethings out. I guess he and his fiancee will be framed with drugs sooner rather than later.
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Roped and branded! Marked with a kiss. Jealousy, lust, and good food to boot. Interesting juxtopositioning of emotions, word pictures and good ol' boy Texas sayings.
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Chapter 18 - Lunch and Conversations
Daddydavek commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Lunch and Conversations
Charlie is having another one of those days, where you don't know whether to dance for joy or howl with frustration. At least his best friend seems to accept the situation. His nephew and Wade may be another can of worms. Scott is making all the right moves and giving Charlie time. Hopefully, they will take it slow and enjoy getting to know each other.
