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I'm also wondering about the back story on the unknown guard who had a medical incident... I loved the chapter!
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Well that cancels their trip into town and their presence in the area will soon become known. Somehow if they make it to the ruins of the haunted castle, they will find more trouble there. Finally, if their faces were magically changed, how was Brohm recognized?
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My comment in the last chapter was that Will was acting like an entitled prick and then Mark throws a mugging on Will and he has to use the swat line. Then Travis shows up and Will is in heaven. Somehow Will and Travis are good for each other and I hope it lasts awhile. Will calls JJ to warn of the visit and JJ panics and Will somehow calms him down as he knows JJ better than JJ himself. Looking forward to more. Also when they finally get into school....
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We found out the ring was the source of the nightmares, but the cursed bog was almost their undoing until the intervention of Morgana. The first part of the chapter painted a picture so bleak that it was almost painful to read. I was on my tablet...sorry!
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We found out the ring was the source of the nightmares, but the cursed bog was almost their undoing until the intervention of Morgana. The first part of the chapter painted a picture so bleak that it was almost painful to read.
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Lots of good stories!
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It does appear they may be moving faster than prudence might dictate.
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The two travelers and fugitives are getting to know each other's private thoughts included. The nightmares seem to be a curse and I am also wondering if they were inflicted by the Hemsley's wizard?
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Halfway through to I wonder where....? Brohm is amazingly warm and Nathan is getting the hots?? First soldiers, then more, then wolves; I wonder what they have to face next?
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That was a nasty fight that could have turned out much differently. Nathan is resourceful and Brohm is strong. They were both lucky this night.
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Even though JJ is getting his life and priorities cleaned up, he it still not one of my favorite characters....and we still have to get through the family dropping in on them. Will is a bit of a self-assured prick, especially without Travis. I really am interested in seeing them in school.
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Gatling was spurned and a drama queen to the end. Poor Calvert and George, they have so much history with others to process...
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Nope Never have I ever walked out of a casino with more money than I arrived.
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BABBY Bob actually blew Billies' young WILLY
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eaten easily
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mellow
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Well another skirmish that ended with them able to move on. I hope they searched the fallen troops for money, water and food.... My biggest complaint is the short chapters.
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Their luck holds and they have a destination, but I expect more than a few bumps along the road.
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Well they have lucked out for now, but clearly the farm is not a safe haven. Perhaps now Nathan will put on his thinking cap!
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I agree the farm is not a permanent hideout, but may afford them some time to come up with a plan. At least I hope so!
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The one problem they face, is that if they become too well known, the scrutiny will get intense and they will have to be even more discreet in using their powers.... Poor Woorawa, as the face of the protest, the press could well become unbearable.
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I think Nathan will need his friend more than he knows...
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I'm just along for the ride wondering what happens next!
