Nephylim

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HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY

Thank you. I am more than happy for my writing to be likened to a strange puzzle that keeps folding in on itself... well, a strange anything really. Glad you're still enjoying hun

Aww thanks hun. I'm so glad you liked the story. it was quite hard to write for quite a few resons but it was very rewarding. When I first posted it I was ragged for not giving it a happy ending but that's just the way it was. Life doesn't always provide happy endings. I'm glad you liked it anyway

Well... Sar knows OF it... as he says... Oh it IS true then... he just doesnt have any experience of it. Thank you do much for your review hun. Don't worry the story and its sequel are written and ready to go. I am thinking of posting another chapter at the weekend but in any event they will be here every wednesday

Exactly. In realtion to this relationship and set of circumstances they are both jeuvanille and out of their depths. They are hobbling along as best they can and not doing a very good job of it. Glory is a drama queen and Sar a arrogant prick. They both have their justifications but it is not a good base for any kind of relationship. They need to sort things out becuase being locked in an eternal bond with someone you can't stand the sight of is going to drive you literally insane if you don't. Events are fast approaching which force both of them to get their heads out of their arses and (hopefully) address their issues and realise what they actually means to each other.

suspicion and lack of trust are terrible things and there is nothing more certain to kill a relationship. If you are in this deep and seriously considering hiring a detective then your trust in your boyfriend is practically non existent. You can't survive in a relationship with no trust. If you can't talk to your boyfriend, confront the situation and trust that what he tells you is the truth then whether he is or whether he isn't cheating is irrelevant becuase the relationship is meaningless anyway.

absolutely but the thing is... even though Sar is a very old vampire he has never ever met anyone remotely like Glory before and he certainly hasn't been bonded before. Love makes fools of all of us the saying goes and it's totally true for these two.

Supervised visits? haha, i never thought of that. I don't think Rover is the best person to supervise, though... someone would end up without a head. Fougue in my head is pronounced Foo zhoo

Absolutely. You've got the nail on the head i think... Glory is just a bag of hormones at the moment. He had NO idea how to cope with a relationship. He barely knows how to cope with a shag. Don't worry the end is in sight. Events will traspire which will put things into perspective for the two. They will shake down in the end. Sar is never going to be in for an easy time though. Thanks for sticking with me. I had to wonder whether i had gone too far and bored people

Slamming the door of my room after me makes no difference whatever because he simply opens it and walks in, shutting it quietly behind him. “Get out of my room.” “Actually,” he says, throwing himself into the chair in front of the fire, “I think we have already established that it’s my room.” “Then I’ll get the hell out.” “And go where?” “I don’t know and I don’t care, as long as it’s far away from you.” God I hate that smirk on his face, as if he’s the master of the world and is

I can't even begin to imagine. It makes you focus on the things that are important. Blessings go to all the folks going through this and the friends and family who worry.

Truly beautiful, and even more so for those who know what's behind it. Four steps is a long way when each one is over a chasm. Take your time. Take the pressure off, relax and know for absolute sure that when the time comes; whether it's this month, this year; there will be many many arms and hearts waiting for you on the other side

Sigh. Would you really be so cruel to give us that and then force them apart? Really? Beautiful chapter sweetie. The tension. the uncertainty, the youthful playfulness. It was all there and the fact that they stopped where they did and din't go past that innocent exploration was absolutley right for that chapter.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY

Absolutely awesome

I am excited for you that you have soemthing to look forward to and somewhere to go. Here's to the beginning of the rest of your life.

I agree with both the comments above. Do you really think that a GA addiction stopping you tidying your desk and doing chores is a bad thing? Am I the only one who nurtures such addictions IN ORDER to avoid such things I know what you mean about the silly thoughtless comments of some of the little ones... but isn't that the way it is in all families. The children test the patience of the adults, but with patience from the adults they grow into more rounded adults from having known us and our guidance. I think that if you were to write then we would read. If you are unsure of your english then an editor will fix it. Maybe you could think about writing your memoires as I for one would read avidly, or perhaps a story based on your lfie.

Thank you for your thoughtful review. I must say that the whole issue of alpha males is not something that has ever occurred to me when I'm writing. I think that Sar and Glory are putting down tiny roots. I mean until the Valentine incident they were on the way to the bedroom and they had both admitted they love each other. Baby steps but in the right direction

I kind of think I see the point but I also think you've focussed in on only one aspect of what's been said. Arse is the British word and ass is the American one. Being British I would alway use arse unless the story calls for ass, for example if the character is American or is using American slang or phrases etc.

Noooooooo the evil eye. If you weren't so cute I'd run away

Happy Birthday darling. HUG HUG

YAY YAY YAY YAY CONGRATULATIONS

Sigh. That was a truly beautiful chapter. I loved the flow around the dinner table and the way that Adam stood up for Kaleb. I can see where Helen is coming from... kind of but she isn't doing Kaleb any favours. I get the feeling that there is going to be some delicious conflict in future chapters. But for now I can't help but smile and enjoy the sweetness.

Oh dear. Life is never kind to people like Chase and Kaleb. I hope that your story will be. Gods they are an awesome couple and i am so glad that Chase allowed himself to go with his feelings. Not sure how the rest of the world is going to see their relationship but together they are beautiful.