Nephylim

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Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it

Thank you Mark... but they do seem to get me into trouble a lot. Ah well... nothing's going to change me so there's not much point worrying about it is there? Meh. It's nice to know that someone thinks that way though so I'm afraid I'm going to have to hug you

I'm always late to the party. Welcome to the site. I hope you enjoy it here and I look forward to reading some of your work. A short gay romance sounds good. There are a few her who write screenplays. I think there are one or two posted. Jonathan Colourfield writes good plays Anyway... Welcome Hopefully once you've made the five posts you will be able to get chatting and making lots of friends. Most of us are a friendly bunch although some of us bite. I think everyone has a slightly skewed view of their own work. At the end of the day what is a story for? It's for enjoyment... the writer in writing it and the reader in reading it. If you have a good story, well written and interesting then who the hell is going to care about subjects and verbs. I would never tell you that you don't comply to the standard norms. One because I wouldn't have the first idea what the norms are (If it sounds right it probably is and if it sounds wrong it probably isn't is the way i view the rules of grammar) and secondly becaue i don't like complying with any norms and like it when other people don't either. If you're nervous get an editor or beta reader to go through it. All of the editors and betas here know their stuff and not only that but they know what the readers here like and don't like and will be able to give you some pointers. Reading is a very subjective action. You like what you like and it doesn't matter if it's technically perfect or not. A good story can have a profound effect on readers but if you strive for that it can end up being dry and preachy. So aim for enjoyment and anything else is a bonus.

When I read It Was A Monday, I was left unsatisfied because some things didn't make sense. I'm glad that was the case becaust filling the holes this way is so much better than trying to fit all the details in one story. It's easier to really get into the head of the character without having to rush on to the next part of the story. I like the idea and I like this chapter. I always have wanted to know what happened to Puck and I can't wait to get to him.

This is a really tricky one. Is it worth straining or breaking the relationship over something this small? On the other hand is it something small? Is it something that is important to you. Different people have different feelings about the subject. To some it's important; to some it's not. Is it something that is going to ruin the relationship anyway because you'll think of it every time you see her and gradually confusion will turn into anger and it will be a real barrier between you? Only you can know If you do decide to tell her I would suggest you do it in a non confrontational way. For examply.... You know what you said the other day about being gay is a lifestyle choice well I've been thinking and that;s not the way I see it, can we talk about it? Give her your point of view and if she's a friend she'll either accept it or accept your opinions differ. If she makes a huge deal of it then I think you can assume that she wasn't that easy with it in the first place.

Haha, Glory is a lot of things but the cat is always first and foremost of them. He likes nothing more than curling up on a rug in front of the fire and lapping at a bowl of cream. he goes into ecstacy over things like cream and coffee BUT he has claws and a tail that has a life of its own and Cat ALWAYS howls when he has sex. Gods I love Glory

Well... one - he's a cat and rover is a dog and two - Glory is a Damphir... half vampire and half... anything else. To be a Damphir in Glory's world is a death sentence and he has spent his life trying to hide it. He's scared that if they know his true nature they will tear him to shreds. I mean Glory's a sweet little purring pussy and Rover is a great big hairy dog.

HAHAHA Wallowing? Yeah I guess.... who doesn't like a good wallow now and again. Actually it's raining a lot right now, I could probably find a nice patch of mud Suck it up? Mmmmmm *licks lips* I am so going to slap you in August... with love of course *blows raspberry*

Thank you hun. I will be uploading every Wednesday and I have completed the story so there will be no waiting or stopping

Thank you You'll get one every Wednesday I hope you like the way it develops and, in particular that you grow to like my beautiful little cat.

The first thing that surfaces in my awareness is warmth. Shit. Warmth is bad. I shouldn’t be feeling warm lying down. That means... that means... Wait. It’s not only warm it’s comfortable. It’s soft. The ground isn’t soft. I move my head and my cheek brushes something cool and silky. Extending my awareness I realise that there is more of the soft silkiness all around me. I’m in a bed, a huge warm soft bed with silk sheets and down pillows. Am I dead? I must be dead. How else would...? Sudd

That was a nice chapter. I think that both films were really sweet and inspiring. The only bit I didn't like was the part at the end with the teacher which I felt was unrealistic but apart from that sweet story

Nice idea alternating POV's by chapter. I like the little details, like the make of the camera etc. I also like the way that things fitted and a new stant is given to something we have already read. I am liking this story a lot

Nice start. I'm warming to both Eli and Viz. And the whole premise,( popular jock meets and makes friend with freak/geek) which is kind of cliche, is dealt with in and interesting way

Thank you I'm quite fond of this story because it was fun to write the lyrics. And the torture was quite cool too

Phana you are just beautiful and the hugs are the best thing in the world Carl... you are SO right. I hadn't thought of that. Everyone is wonderful. And of course I will survive. Battered and worn but alive and still kicking... and biting

Don't worry, you know me and happy endings. I can promise tears but whether they will be good ones or bad ones well... that I'm not saying

Well that was unexpected. A threeway split? i don't think that Jed is in the running, at least I hope not. That was a cheap shot. To be honest I have no idea who I would pick... Bill or David although I think that Bill is the guy i would put my money on. He's the one who's in deepest and has most to lose. I'm interested that people seem to think that David will win in the end.At the moment i would be putting my money on Bill. There is so much about the story to like. It flows smoothly and the chapter is ended almost before you realise it has begun. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Awww... that was wicked hot. I like Bill so much... so why do i get the feeling that he is up for getting his heart broken? I am feeling that the way Bill was looking at TR the way he was becuase he knows that David is intersted and is worried about the competition. I'm wondering 2 things... Is every man in that town gay and does every gay man in that town after TR I really really don't like Jed and I have a feeling that if he's not up to no good now he will be soon. He just doesn't seem like a man who takes rejection well

I like Julie, although I'm not sure I would want to talk to her for any length of time I'd like to taste her pie though. The plot thickens eh? I never did like the equestrian type although there suddenly seem to be a lot of men in TR's life.

So yeah... David likes TR and Bill knows it. My only wonder is whether David likes Doc or he was jealous of TR likeing Doc, i think it's the latter. Of course David's wife has 'left' and I'm very intersted in the ghost. Again the lovely little touches like the pasta. I am so loving this story.

I spent the first half laughing and the second half smiling. The whole scene with the rednecks was hilarious and the conversations with Bill sweet as hell. And then in the middle we have a mind blowing... erm... blow and that's a hell of a good recipe for a very enjoyable chapter to what is heating up to be a great story

Hot hot hot. And still with the detail, although i won't be checking YouTube thank you very much It says much for your writing that i feel I am getting to know all three men, and a little about Bill too. I'm not really one for big sassy men in uniform but if it floats your boat sail with it and having a big throbbing motor between your legs can only be a good thing right?

I really should finish reading Gordy as I had come to a critical place BUT I then started reading this one and I have to keep it going. I have no idea who this guy is, not really but I love him already. There are so many little irrelevant details that make the story incredibly rich. I love it... the mare with the carrot... priceless. I have always enjoyed the fluidity with which you write and this story doesn not disappoint.