Nephylim

Snigger Plot holes are made by plot worms. They are about four inches long with fangs that are twice as long as their heads. They have no legs but can move at incredible speed often overruning a whole chapter or series of chapters before the author realises they are there. Bad infestations can occur where chapters are released as they are written and in severe cases they may inbed themselves so deeply into the story that they cannot be removed without drastic surgery. The only way to prevent a plot worm infestation is to continually re read your story to look for evidence of worms, such as droppings, footprints or burrow holes. If you can catch the worm before it lays its eggs then you might be able to prevent and infestation. In very severe cases death of the story may occur together with serious damage to credibility of readers who are unfortunate enough to catch the worms.

I could so get used to waking up warm and comfortable. Mmmm. Wait, what’s that smell? It’s making my nose twitch. It’s food, hot food, meaty food and... And... Oh yeah... coffee with cream. The first soft purrs slip out but then I hear them, the voices. They are clearly trying to keep the volume down because they think I’m still asleep so maybe I should put a cork in the purring and listen to what they’re saying. In my situation, the more information I have the better. “What the hell did you

Going well hun, and it's only the start of the summer. IOU one hug. Rain check until the end of August.

WOW, that was interesting. Are you planning to write more because it's the perfect start to a story. it is so intriguing

I know the feeling of sudden unemployment. \the panic is too fresh not to remember and sympathise. As for the robbery... bastards. You're one of the toughest people I know. I know you'll be okay in the end. In the meantime it's okay to fall apart and be weak for a time.

Finally. The reason that I always have this kind of scene in my stories is because people's true worth and their true feelings come out in stressful situations. I think that the whole more macho than macho think is very prevalent around here but underneath there are warm and accepting people which is sad.

It's the way it is with people around here. This was the first story i set in the place where I live and I think it's as true to life as anything I've read because I've put 'my' people into it. Thanks for the reivew. I'm glad you like the story

Thank you very much. I have fond memories of my art classes too so I guess that was coming through here.

As a mother that gave me chills. I have no idea how i would cope with that. She is so brave. Blessings to James and his family

That was just goddamn awesome. WHAT an improvement on the draft... or maybe it's just because I have read it for so long. I loved it hun. The ending was perfect

Dot Matrix. Weird... kind of like me I guess

You don't???? Why?

Haha... I don't think it's much of anyone's thing... but it's pretty par for the course for cats and dogs. Unfortunately this scene will never be repeated thanks for the comment

SILVER The last few days have been hard, harder than I thought they would be. I suppose I hadn’t realised how much I’ve changed. It seems like even the small things are hard for River. We were watching a programme on the television last night, about policemen investigating crime. There were a couple of episodes and I was really enjoying them although River kept looking at me in a strange way. Then a new episode started and it was about prostitutes on the streets. River got freaked out and was

Uh Oh. When did Logan get so stupid. I can see the crash coming a mile off and I wouldn't be the slightest but surprised if there are going to be other photographs involved. I bet Tori told Eric all about the photos. I wonder what they're going to do with Logan and whether Taylor will forgive him,

that was awesome; very sweet but way too short. I want to see what happens next. *pout* I reckon that's about as good a start to a story I've come across in many ways. Give me MORE

come the revolution brother

You're absolutely right. This is a one shot wonder; there will be no more. Aww... I liked the pus filled boil... isn't that what anger feels like when it crawls over you like that? I know that mine does. Thanks for the review hun

It's not planned at the moment because I have so many other projects on the go but I have a feeling that Luma, Star, Bridge and Sacha won]t let me go for too long

Sounds like it could be complex and emotionally charged story. I would like to read it. Why struggling? Anything I can do to help?

Pity yoy? Why the hell should I pity you? I haven't been though a fraction what you have and to go through all that and come out as strong as you don't beleive you are is something that should be admired and not pitied. What do you give us... your comanpy, your humour and your nicknames (and it hasn't escaped my attention that I haven't got one) You make us smile and look at the wrold in a slightly different way... somtimes slight is all that's needed. You're an insufferable brat but I am very fond of you nonetheless :wub:

HAHA. I can't deny that crazy and as for the cat I might well have been because writing this one was so easy. Thanks as always for the review and the support

Glory would approve. He likes cream Thanks for the review hun. Glad you like it

Awww thanks hun. I adore Glory, I think he's awesome and he only gets better. Don't worry about not writing this story is completed, along with two others and a couple of others over the halfway mark. I don't ever start to post a story unless it is completely finished so none of my stories are ever going to left unfinished. Thank you so much for your kind comments.

The temperature drops as soon as Fougue leaves. I am still very shaky and I don’t trust myself to speak. I feel... out of my depth. I try to do my usual and push everything aside to live in the moment and just enjoy the warmth and comfort... but it doesn’t really work. “I’m sorry.” I look up, startled. “What?” “I’m sorry I scared you. I didn’t realise that you... that you didn’t know how things are here. I should have realised. I’m sorry.” “I don’t understand. What do you mean ‘how