Nephylim
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Ooooh, sigh. I wonder what Trav has under his bed Going on the run; colouring outside the lines; I think more than one line has been crossed. how exciting.
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WOW that ate into my writing time I have been watching it for ages. What an absolutely fabulous idea and those videos... gods those people impressed me, all of them. WATCH THEM.
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There are very few lesbian stories on here. I have only read two and I can't for the life of me remember who wrote them. I think they were written by the same person. one was about someone recruiting slaves for an island. it was really good but i can't remember any more. I know, i'm useless but honestly the fact that i can't remember has nothing to do with the quality of the story And Pabz. I have a story Red Gold, which is ng It might be up your street... or not
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That is just wonderful, darling. I am so happy that he's on the mend. He's been through so much but there's nothing like a brush with death to make you appreciate life. He's got a long and beautiful life ahead.
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That was also an incredibly emotional chapter, a real roller coaster. How wonderful. Yes, I think Bashta has found his niche. Exchanging learning about the different methods of healing would be interesting but i appreciate there are more important things on the cards. Cavel does come across as impatient but also caring. i think that this could easily be overpowering and could be limiting but I think Bashta is up for it.
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Come visit me
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This was quite a disturbing chapter. There was a lot of pain and anguish and it is so hard to read about children suffering. However my respect for Bashta grows deeper with every word.
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I am just loving Bashta more and more. He is such a sweetie, so gentle and wise and brave. Cavel is so lucky... hmmm... all going far too well
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Chapter 6: Cementing the Bond
Nephylim commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 6: Cementing the Bond
Yes, that was certainly hot. I dont know why but I was really shocked when we started to see cars and planes... I just wasn't expecting it. Poor Basta I fully empathise with the whole plane thing. *shudder*. -
Hmmmm... that was sweet. I liked the imagery of the temple and that picture !!!!! Hmmm... so now what. No axes falling yet
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This is just getting too good. The images of the plague were disturbing, the emotions even more so but there was so much sweetness and by the end there was a feeling of peace and hope... so when does the axe fall
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HAHA. That was so funny. He's such a little bitch. I love him. He's showing his vulnerability now though, owning it. Even allowing himself to feel it. I really really like him
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I adore Bashta. He's such a little minx. I hope he keeps the rest of them on their toes... I have a feeling that he will. I think that even though he is overcome with Cavel he is going to give him a run for his money. oh yes, I like this one
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Chapter 1: Invaded Territory
Nephylim commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 1: Invaded Territory
An interesting start. How did I let this one get away from me. I love the Cathara. I shall have to post Damphir soon or people will be thinking I stole poor old Glory from you I love the way your characters interact and I am waiting to see more. -
I prefer Odin but I like my men wiry and wearing large floppy hats. But my absolute favourite is a toss up between Athene and Cernunnos... and that would probably be with Lucifer Morningstar, he's always horny. In case anyone didn't get the joke (or it is deleted by the mods ) i would clarify that my ideal 'man' bar one would be Lucifer Morningstar, he has an awesome wiggle and a really really really big.... sword Does not compute Depends whether you mean conservatives or Conservatives. ( have deleted the rest of this post in deference to a beloved Conservative who is EVEN a Margaret Thatcher Fan *bites lip HARD* but still manages to be a fabulous person ) However, it did have some connection with Satan
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Thank you for the update ricky. I have been thinking of Dustin a lot... you too... and sending what positive energy I can. Of course with the glorious weather that has been easier I'm still sending it out there and keeping my fingers crossed but so glad it's good news so far.
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A lovely poem. I prefer free verse because I don't have to stop and think about form and I can just let myself flow with the words. Yes, it does seem personal but universal at the same time. I really loved it. I especially liked the part where you said (and I can't remember the exact words so bear with me) let me hold your hand; not because I want to or because I need to but just because it's there to be held. Sigh
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Oh god that was unexpected and so shocking. I can understand Wylie's pain but there is no excuse for what he did. A tiny criticism was the constant repetition of 'flash of pain'. THere was one point where it got distracting and that was such a vivid and painful moment that it shouldn't be distracted from. The feelings that John has after the rape are totally natural and exactly right. The whole chapter was a hell of a shock and now I can understand why the relationship didn't workl/ Oh poor John and poor Wylie. It had all been so perfect and now it is dead. Clearly the friendship survived if nothing else so I can't wait to see how they get from here to there.
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I'm not sure if I want to stay tuned. This is all so very comfortable... so 'right'. I know it doesn't work out and I don't want to know why. It would be so much more pleasant to just stay here in the warm comfort of their closeness and never have to see it go cold. Awesome job
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I liked this chapter too and, yes it is smoother but it's not the editing that makes a good, or even great story, it's all the little touches that makes it personal, like the Christmas decorations. I like the fact that there has been quite a lot of sex but it hasn't become stale... it was all different and fresh and new. I have a feeling though that Wylie is going to regret not talking to John right there and then
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That was a lovely chapter. It was slow and steady and sweet.. like the lovemaking. Only one tiny grammar comment... a point it moot and not mute I think that Pavlov's dogs would be salivating all over the pre cum if they could be
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This is a very nicely moving chapter. Everything is very natural and flowing. As Daddydavek says I am getting anxious to return to the present and to find out who Gordy is. I think I know who John and Wylie are now. i have admit though that I would like to know what happened to John and Wylie.
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Well, I feel a little embarassed but I have to admit that I didn't notice those errors; I rarely do when i am drawn into a story... rather like Wylie and John were drawn in That sex scene was very natural and not forced as are many i have read. The story is fluid and moves on well. I am looking forward to more.
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oh such an exciting end. The descriptions were fantastic. I feel that I can see everything, through Wylie's eyes and through John's. The relationship is getting complex
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I'm glad you're enjoying. I love River and Silver too... so much that I wrote a sequel for the first time ever. Things will be as they will be, whether for Silver and River, or Silver and Asher or... someone else.
