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Nephylim

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  1. WOO HOO Happy birthday hun :wub:
  2. Nephylim

    Chapter 3

    Well... I keep saying and people keep not believing. I AM the Queen of Evil and sometimes I let me out to play. Glad you're enjoying it hun and yes, Bella does have a very sweet smile
  3. Nephylim

    Chapter 5

    Interesting developments. i wonder where this is going to lead. i'm really taking to your characters which can only be a good thing although I think I would probably have slapped Alliesa by now
  4. Nephylim

    Chapter 4

    rotten timing indeed. I have to admit that I find the time thing a little confusing but I'm happy to bear with it for now
  5. Nephylim

    Chapter 3

    Cute ending. I like the way that we are given a lot of information in an indirect way. The flow of dialogue is awesome and the whole 'feel' of it catches me. I like it. The idea of the web too is something very familiar to me. I await with interest where this is going to go.
  6. Nephylim

    Chapter 2

    The song is beautiful and the premise interesting. I am taken by the magical feel and the flow.
  7. Nephylim

    Chapter 1

    How strange and beautiful. I love the feel of this piece. I am looking forward to reading more
  8. Nephylim

    My Gift To You

    I can't think of two people who more deserve to be happy together. I am so glad you posted the poem, the words, though simple, convey so much and it's just so beautiful. I am so so so so so happy for you both. :wub:
  9. It's probably committing treason to say so but i think that hat is totally ridiculous. I mean... WHAT??? Pipa on the other hand.... Mmmm... I wonder if she'd consider a well worn Welsh woman with a dicky back and hair to match her dress
  10. But it isn't the end. It's nowhere near the end. There are 40 chapters so we are only just half way through and there is plenty of time for just about anything to happen
  11. But it isn't the end. It's nowhere near the end. There are 40 chapters so we are only just half way through and there is plenty of time for just about anything to happen
  12. I get that, but how many people listening to that ceremony have any idea what cannonical or ecclesiatical law is? i am not going to press my point any further because it is very much a political one. I was just surprised that no one anywhere had commented on it when it hit me in the face the instant it was out of his mouth. The dress was lovely and the canary... um Queen was very dignified and almost smiled once or twice. On a side note I think Kate's sister is a real babe
  13. as long as you are respectful of the beliefs of others you have every right to expect that we be respectful of yours. Which form of Satanism do you practice. For me, I found it too dogmatic... too many rules. I had the same problem with Wicca. I would be interested in hearing more of your practices though. Being a vampire I have always been interested in the dark side... although I have found Satanism to be (comparatively) not that dark really
  14. I also make an effort to neutralise neg reps if they are simply for expressing an opinion which is different to the 'established' norm. I also negate anything put in a story I'm reading. If you don't like the story don't read it. Simples.
  15. Did anyone else but me hear this bit??? or maybe it was just me who interperated it the way I did. I just wondered what the hell gave them the right (and they chose this version which was written in 1928) to make this kind of comment I require and charge you both, as ye will answer at the dreadful day of judgement when the secrets of all hearts shall be disclosed, that if either of you know any impediment, why ye may not be lawfully joined together in Matrimony, ye do now confess it. For be ye well assured, that so many as are coupled together otherwise than God's word doth allow are not joined together by God; neither is their Matrimony lawful. So yes I did watch... right up to the point I walked out of the room. (I didn't like the part where they were told to bring up their children in fear either)
  16. 48???!!!! HAHA Older than me ( by a little over a year ) Have a wonderful birthday babe :) :wub:
  17. I hate to print. I have to do it for filling in most legal forms but I really hate it. I much prefer 'joined up writing' and I can engage in calligraphy well when i really want to, although my patience is limited because I like to do everything fast. Nothing is ever fast enough to get my thoughts down
  18. I got 72 but I did have three mistakes. Mind you I had never even heard of some of the words that they wanted to spell in there.
  19. Asher River has no idea where he is and that suits Silver. He truly believes that River doesn't want him any more and that River is better off without him. He certainly has no intention of going back although that is by no means an easy decision for him. River is his past and Asher is his future... at least in his mind right now. Whether that proves to be the case in reality remains to be seen. Life has a way of throwing obstacles in our paths some big and some small; those obstacles can often send us off in different directions or back to the same one. River may or may not come back on the scene at some point but one thing is sure... Silver is finding himself at last and he is not going to be putting his new life on hold waiting for him.
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    Chapter 2

    Hmmm at first I couldn't see how you would view Jayden as a lone wolf when he is absolutely the centre of the group but I can see what you mean, he has a tendency to shut himself off from everyone, even himself. I'm glad you like Siona... she is an AWFUL woman, but, I hope that there is SOME sympathy for her when she tells her story. Thank you so much for your review. i can't wait to discuss the story with you
  21. David was the reason Silver was thrown out of the car remember? The one whose grave they visited at the end of Enigma I. I have to tell yu because I don't think his name crops up anywhere else in the story... well maybe as a mention. I NEVER DEMAND a review at all let alone every chapter. I am very very grateful for every single review but I don't expect them. Well, I guess that's not entirely true about this particular story because I feel so much about it and feel that I have let down my boys if no one seems to like it sooooooooooo THANK YOU
  22. Asher turns away from the wall, to sit on his hip facing me. Our fingers are still linked. Neither of us have let go. I don’t know how I feel. My head is full of River. Speaking about what happened has brought him back again and he is right here in the room with me. I am full of him. The pain I felt when he left me is back too. It is dull now and drags at me, rather than stabbing through my heart. I know that he loved me, right to the end he loved me. I think he still loves me and that i
  23. Nephylim

    Chapter 1

    You could dream of worse. The band is hot. What cliffie? Thanks for reading and reviewing I am looking forward to discussing the story with you
  24. Nephylim

    Chapter 4

    That was sweet. The slow build towards something more than just a drunken fumble now and again. I am finding that I like both of them in different ways but when the heck are they going to wake up and admit... not just that they smell the coffee but that they actually know what coffee it
  25. Nephylim

    Chapter 3

    God, aren't misunderstandings great I like the way this one was resolved. Once more the eroticism. Okay they were more explicit this time but not overly so and it wasn't just about the sex. Nice development
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