Nephylim

Haha thank you darling. Hope you enjoy... and where's your updates

Why do you feel terrible you moose? You do what you have to do like the rest of us and if you need a break then have one. If anyone doesn't understand they're not worth worrying about Soooo glad to have you back though Oh and if the drama overspills here then you have a LOT of people just waiting to raise you above it and kick the shit out of whoever is responsible.

That's what I said .... No sex Doesn't mean they weren't sexy though

I like to read sex and I like to write sex. I agree that poorly written sex is a huge turn off. However, if what you are saying is that sex should be strictly rationed and only used sparingly then why does anyone ever read Mark Arbour and I notice that Comsie's not easy on the sex either. I write erotic stories. That doesn't mean that there has to be sex to be eroticism. There is a particular writer just above who writes huge chunks of steaming hot hotness with no actual sex at all... although what's the definition of sex? Is it just penetration? Is it touching? Blow jobs? Licking? Looking? I like exploring different ways and kinds... Fallen has lots of strange sex. LIC is.. hard and harder with toys, Enigma II is... which bit goes where in places and I think the point of the tale is that if you're reading or writing erotic literature then you are going to be sorely disappointed if you think you are going to find no sex in it. And let's not beat about the bush.. this site is first and foremost about erotic literature. I'm not saying that there are no stories on here that have no sex in them... but there aren't many in comparison to the ones that have.

That was really sweet. I don't know who I like best Kyle or David. David is sexier but Kyle is sweeter. The whole story is really sweet. When are we going to find out who's on Spencer's list

Oh yeah... I like David. I like him a lot I think that the way you write is real fun. It's quite a clinical way of writing but there is so much emotional colour in there... more like role play nurses then the read thing The seduction scene was smoking hot and it is so subtle. I love it

Awesome. I'm glad there are two more chapters to read. What an unquie concept and way of telling the story. I think its a great start

So beautiful and nothing Beiberish at all

The story becomes more complx and more intersting. I am so intrigued by the 'inventions' Alan is coming up with... and so will everyone else be. The whole Dreamscape thing totally fascinates me and I love what you do with it. I am already reading on. One of my favourite stories... ever

This is very intriguing. I'm glad you put it in because I really really like it. The whole flavour of it sets the scene and the tone for the rest of the story and I particuarly like the last line. It just sucks you in. I challenge you to show me WHERE I said it was too dark... I think you will find comments asking for more

WOW... that picture at the beginning was awesome I have to say that this is not my favourite chapter, although it is a fabulous one. It sets up the story really well and introdues some fabulous characters. It only gets better as it goes along and I am exited to read more and more and more

Thank you hun. I really appreciate the reviews. River is behaving like a total ass. The biggest issue he has is communication. he doesn't feel that Silver is capable of that kind of discussion and he tries to keep everything sweet and even for him. If course in real life that never works and he is seriously underestimating Silver and not doing him any favours at all. Thanks for following the story.

I can't blame River for his jealousy. I think that I would have had trouble in that situation myself; I think anyone would. Sam is such a stabilising influence. It's a shame River doesn't listen to him more Sandi is just a complete pain in the arse, she is one of those people who sail through life on their own course, believing that everyone else is going in the same direction and, even if they're not, dragging them along behind. She's a sweet person at heart but... god what a pain.

Phew.

Nice... AND you were put first before another guy Nice work Baby steps

Don't you dare mellow. I'll love you either way but unmellow you is so much more fun

Haha... River is a lucky man shame he doesn't realise it yet. God he is so hung up on the whole past thing... it's strange because surely it should be Silver who does that. I apologise in advance for the end of chapter 5

WHAT cliffie... I never seem to get nominated for that, I wonder why It must be the boys with big sticks I send round to the admins so they edit them out Glad you're enjoying the story though

thank you hun, I liked this chapter too... it's the start of the real cracks Stop playimg that music or I am going to be accused of a cliffie and it so clearly wasn't... I mean who's going to get hurt by a phonecall

Sigh. didn't you read the forum post... I clearly said that this is NOT a cliffie. Sandi is someone I know slightly and she is sooooo annoying. Glad you didn't hate River

This should have been the best afternoon we have ever had. Silver strolled in the park, looking in wonder at everything... the trees, the plants, the lake, the ducks, the children in the playground. Everything astonished him. He astonished me. He was very hesitant, constantly looking back at me for reassurance. I so wanted to be there by his side but Sandi dominates that position. Doesn’t she see how scared he is? Whenever people came near, and in the warm sunshine there are a lot of peo

To be honest I have been worried about him for a while.

Hun, it's so typical of you to think of us when you should be thinking only of yourself and your mother. You are just the sweetest thing. The last thing you should worry about is our sorry butts. You have enough to worr about and we will be happy to wait.... you and your stories are worth it. Take care. Out thoughts are with you

Well, the cat is alive until you open the box and find out it's dead... don't open the box

I'm holding my breath and you wouldn't want me to turn blue would you