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Nephylim

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  1. don't be so sure they are not going to be shown. Thanks for the kind words
  2. I guess I have a somewhat idealitic view of life that comes out in my writing I don't see ^Haze and Ace as anyt6hin5g like Silver and River but I suppose the way they are with each other is comparable
  3. maybe that's why he affected me so much. Now you've pointed it out I can see it. I wouldn't mind having Silver in my dreams - in fact I have
  4. don't be so sure that it wouldn't happen in real life. My ex used to work in one of those houses and residents often used to get to him - not like Silver, more like Julia ^He never stayed in like River did but there were some who did for a day or two
  5. Everyone picks up on the fact that Silver is struggling but not everyone realises quite how much River's ghosts affect his ability to form relationships
  6. Oh heck. It's a mistake you know, feeling safe reading my stories
  7. If you think that was shocking read on Silver is no one's normal god I love him ^Hmmmm. I think River has a lot to be scared of in his professional position Wonder what positions they can find. Ohhh You've read Enigma II so you know _
  8. I think that River is an undervalued character.Yes Silver is awesome but what would he be without River. I'm really glad you apprciate him
  9. I'm so glad you like my Silver. You know how much I love him _
  10. don't hurt yourself As soon as i can get back on properly I will post a couple of new chapters of Enigma II an FTW. You are so awesomely cool _
  11. Aoooooooo grrrrr
  12. Nephylim

    Chapter 1

    thank you _
  13. I was on my way to class when this really hot guy/girl bumped into me andwe dropped our books. I was so busy looking at his/her ass that I didn't notice he/she had picked up my book by mistake.
  14. Confidence and self respect ... well ok just one of them but you should still hold on to the other.
  15. Nephylim

    She's not there

    WOW.. yeah
  16. Actually, I liked the imagery See how subjective writing is
  17. Nephylim

    Chapter 13: Shit!

    I want to hug both of them. The title of the chapter was completely apt. Haze is clearly in really serious trouble and I can see that a lot of it comes from his mother. She is clearly unbalanced and that hardly helps her son. Haze is completey shut down and needs some opening up. I'm wondering whether helping Haze could be the thing that saves Blake. I have to admit that I can't really see the way they are going to get out of this situation.
  18. Woooooo how exciting. WOOO WOOO WOOO I think it's dorms at the YHA Connor
  19. Giggle. You definitely look better this way
  20. Unfortunately there are a lot more words in this story that are not fun to read but I hope that you bear with me because there are a lot more words that are good to read. You are going to have to wade through some shit to get to the gold though so grab your wellies and your vodka. Thanks for the review they are always appreciated.
  21. Do really tight wrist bands count I don't do suits EVER. Yay!!! Although... um... maybe not I'm not arrogant, I'm not a workaholic and I'm not rich. Does that mean I'm not sexy either On the up side I speak legalese which is a bit of latin, a bit of high english and a lot of bullshit I've not gone professional yet but I am a very enthusiastic amateur Absolutely not my type in any way shape or form, l like the trousers and the guy in the middle at the back has lovely eyes but that's about it.
  22. Hi de hi. Welcome, have fun, be cynical and sarcastic and evil... oh wait... that's me Be yourself hun
  23. I love it. I love everything about it. There is so so much to see in there, so many ways to read it, so many commentaries it opens up in the mind and at its most basic a sweet story about redemption. You are trying hard to fool us all James. You might have a tough shell but inside you have the soul of a poet
  24. Nephylim

    Poems

    Oh I forgot to mention how well written the poems are, I get carried away sometimes.
  25. That was hilarious. Only two meanings Red? I've picked out at least three... no, now I come to think of it... and looking at the past paragraph... four
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