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Chapter 27 - The Choir and the Wheel
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 27 - The Choir and the Wheel
Thank you. I was a bit worried about how people would take the total change of direction. The last two chapter are going to be... um... er... explosive. Thanks, as always for your review. -
HAPPY BIRTHDAY Remind me to buy you a drink when I see you
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It is the middle of the night and I am disoriented. We are all tangled in each other as we’d fallen at the end of our lovemaking. With a few pauses to eat we had pretty much been making love all afternoon and evening. It was dark before we finally fell into an exhausted slumber. And now I’m awake. There is someone there; in the darkness. I can see well in very little light but there is something I am not seeing now. “Who’s there?” Star hisses next to me and I am surprised to see that he
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Chapter 13 - Ghosts from the Past
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 13 - Ghosts from the Past
Well, I think Karma will play its part but I'm not sure that it's River who suffers. I love this part of the story. It really is a pivotal point so I hope you enjoy the rest of it even though.... -
WOW, that was some ride. I have to admit I didn't expect that to be Dan's secret. Way to go at surprising us. I still can't see exactly where this is going to go which is awesome I love Matt and Dan and the war hanging over them adds pressure and poignancy to everything this do
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What can I say Phew. Erotic Sexy Yeah baby
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Well, It is a frightening thought. However, I really don't mind who knows what about me. I am a completely open book. If people email me that I don't want to email me I can block them. If people telephone me when I don't want them telephoning me I can block the number. I can pretty much block annoying people anywhere and, lets face it as far as the authorities are concered they don't need to look at facebook to track you. If you use the internet, telephone, or any other mass media you're screwed. There is no such thing as privacy.
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Coffee has to be a first because I simply can't start the day without it so all of my other addictions depend on that one to get going. Chocolate... it's almost as good as sex. GA Sex... of cours... well I would be if I was having any Painting GA Writing Reading GA
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Chapter 12 - Making Friends
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 12 - Making Friends
Oh you have no idea how much worse it can get for either of them. Silver's whole life has been one of seduction. That is part of his training that is coming through now. Don't forget that Silver has been through a lot even after being released and it has done all sorts of things to his mind that are beginning to release him. Can River resist the irresistible pull? We'll see. -
Chapter 11 - Taking Strides
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Taking Strides
Yes, River is broken. It's not just about Nikki. You'll see in book 2 but I'm so glad you are getting him. I like River, he's a rock, at least in this book. He is so caring and he fight so hard to be a rock -
Chapter 10 - A Journey into the Past
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 10 - A Journey into the Past
It's all about struggle for both of them. I love your reviews because people seem to totally underrated River and you 'get' him -
I think Hell is kind of coolish, okay maybe chilly but that is not enough of a smile for penguins and polar bears
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Hiya, nice to meet you. If you need any help with posting your story here then just shout... but not too loud or one of the stressed out admins/mods might eat you Totally NOT My bad that the first word I read in that whole post was 'whore' By that I meant it was the word I homed in on and not that I did't read anything that came before.
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Wow, well I don't know what to say. I fell in love with these characters so I suppose that comes through in the writing. I'm so glad you liked the story and I hope you like the way it goes. It might shock you but I think I redeem myself in the end I'm going to start posting the sequel soon, after Fallen is finished so let's keep fingers crossed that it will live up to this one
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If you want to reply to something that has been posted on your profile then just click on the name of the person who made the post and then you can post a reply on their profile. It's like everything else.. easy when you know how
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You can make a post wherever you like hun, although it might have been better if you had put it in the Welcome New Members section. Never mind, it stil gives us the opportunity to say hello. Are you a reader or will we have the pleasure of reading some of your work? Take a look around and if there is anything I can help with then just yell. Bear in mind that I'm a bit deaf
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Chapter 31: Pre Game Warm Up
Nephylim commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Chapter 31: Pre Game Warm Up
Nice chapter. You are such a tease. You have all this 'normal' sweet, entertaining stuff going on... life I guess but nothing is happning with Peter. I really like that. They play off each other don't they. The more that is happening on the outside highlights how little is happening on the inside and the little that's happening on the inside makes you think of the inanity of what is happening on the outside It also shows how quickly the dramatic can become the mundane. People have an incredible ability to adapt and normalise. great going -
Thank you It is as it is.
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that was a hell of a journey. HELL of a journey. The end was fantastic. I love stories that end with a beginning. It doesn't matter whether or not we ever find out what happens next. This is enough. THis chapter was just stunning. Completely stunning. God I love Alex. I may have mentioned that a few times If he doesn't remember Keegs can I try and convince him that he loves me instead.
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Good good. Next chapter soon. Want to see what a cat and bird can do together. I like that kind of thing... as you know.
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Just in case you haven't been keeping up. Luma is a fallen angel. Serif is also and angel, a Seraph, one of the most powerful. In case you have't realised Serif isn't his name but what he is. We will find out his real name later. Try to keep up Taz is Nephylim, a child of angel and man; Bridge is a faerie and Star is a dragon, about to be ascended. Sacha is human. Any qestions? Serif and Taz let go of my arms and I throw myself forward but I bounce back from what seems like
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Chapter 6 - Making Progress
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Making Progress
What cliff? Where? I don't remember there being a cliff here... there is a cliff later but it's a non threatening one :)I don't know if I have ever specifically stated how old he is but I see him as about 24 -
Chapter 5 - Shades of Blue
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Shades of Blue
River suspects something. He is beginning to put pieces together but, like you he is not piecing them together yet. It will become all too clear, all too soon -
It's a defence to keep something away. River is one strong guy and very, very morally strong. He feels is it unprofessional to feel this way and he is therefore struggling not to. It really is as simple as that for him.Thanks, as always, for your reviews hun
