Nephylim
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YAY YAY YAY!!! Now all he has to do is find him.... Eeeeep. He hasn't gone back has he? I mean he has GOT to find him
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OMFG NOOOOOOOO He's got to thing twice when he calms down. I mean for f**k sake he loves Alex, how can he throw all that away just because Alex is different. It is such a testament to your writing that you make me feel so much. I am so rooting for Alex
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Secret's out then. It's all coming together. It was quite a shock... well to me it was anyway... that Alex was involved in the accident that injured Keegs. God I love Alex and I so hope that this doesn't spoil things for him
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Shit, scary stuff. My heart is beating fast and I am so glad there is another chapter WOnderful writing as usual. I have a bad feeling about what is going to happen next.
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Zane is shut out but unexpectedly gets let in.
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Zane is shut out but unexpectedly gets let in.
Me too. I wonder who it was. I think Mark and Elizabeth might know, they didn't seem very surprised. Thanks for the review. -
Zane is shut out but unexpectedly gets let in.
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Zane is shut out but unexpectedly gets let in.
Go Zane. Yeah I like Zane; he's feisty -
Zane is shut out but unexpectedly gets let in.
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Zane is shut out but unexpectedly gets let in.
I like ghosties I don't know whether the ghost was nice really but useful, certainly.Thanks for the review and I'm really glad you liked the story as it was really fun to write. -
Chapter 30: A Night Out To Forget
Nephylim commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Chapter 30: A Night Out To Forget
Tense chapter but it moves the game on fast. Jase is starting to doubt himself and that's dangerous. I'm sure the game will go fine as he will be surrouded by his friends and he gets very focused when he is in the game. You are being very cruel you know. Although I am very interested in what is going on in Jason's life I am far more interested in what's happening to Peter. Way to go for the awesome build up of tension and unfolding of one awesome story -
First impressions can make a big impact and Silver makes an impact alright :)Thanks for the review hun
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To be honest the people who work with River are based on people who used to work with my ex when he was doing this kind of job... at least the kind of people he told me they were
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Oh come ON. Are you doing this deliberately???? Cliffie after Cliffie. I am soooo going to nominate you for the Reader's Choice Awards. I, of course, never ever write cliffhangers
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That really was a headful. How much more are these poor kids going to have to take. Their bond is really strong but will that be enough. Not even I am that cruel to my characters... all the time At least this to ime it's Velaku in the shit. It's fab that Natham finally stood up to his father.
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Another cliffie my dear That was such a fantastic chapter I don't even know where to start. Poor Natham always seems to be on the receiving end getting saved... although thinking about it he did save Velaku when he jumped in front of the knife. I'm glad that bloody snake is dead. Hope than Natham will be well enough to get out of there
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Awesome. The whole chapter was dark and violent and tense.... just as I like them. The confrontation was FABULOUS
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That was so shocking. First with the mother, then with the story (which is fabulous and could have been taken from one of mine ), then the swetness of Natham and Velaku together and then the end... I mean the end.... Cliffie, cliffie, cliffie
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Oh that was so sweet. It made me tear up. Natham's devotion is so touching.
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Sigh, what a roller coaster. The feeling between these two is strong. It is clear they are going to be lifelong mates. I hope that Natham will be better soon. It's clear he has been through a lot and he needs to be healed on the inside as well as the outside
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Natham sounds interesting, very interesting. I am loving him and I have a strong feeling we haven't seem the last of him/ You wrie very good dialogue and that is the main thing I look at in a story. It also handles emotion with delicacy and insight
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Another fine chapter and more details about the world the story is set in and the people who inhabit it. The Carthera are truly fascinating. They are very different but so much the same, especially the teenagers
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That was an incredible roller coaster, from dreams, to death to new beginnings. Truly an awesome introduction to what seems set to be a fascinating journey to a whole new world
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Zane is having problems. He's on the outside looking in when deep shit is going down. Fortunately his friend lets him in but it's a while before he realised that something is not right; because there are not footprints in the dust.
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Zane is shut out but unexpectedly gets let in.
Nephylim posted new chapter in Footprints in the Dust
“I’m sorry, Sir, but I am afraid I cannot let you in.” “What do you mean, ‘cannot let me in’? Since when? You know me. You know...” “I’m very sorry, Master Zane but I am under strict orders not to let you into the house.” “Who’s orders? Not Mark’s.” “No Sir. The orders are from Her Ladyship. I am instructed to have security escort you from the premises if you are... persistent.” “Her Ladyship?” Zane’s heart plummeted. “Is she here?” “Indeed she is, Master Zane.” The sour expres -
Thank you. River is an underrated character I think. He's a really nice guy. My ex used to work in a house very much like that, although more for physically challenged people. I have some idea of what goes on. Myself, I think I would have serious difficulty keeping my sanity around Silver, but it would be ok... who needs sanity when you spend all your time in bed
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Let's make an out of court settlement :)I'm glad you like the story and I hope you keep liking it because it's one of my favourites and one of the characters is my absolue favourite
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More sweetness. It's moving on nicely but I want to know what's going to happen to Peter now please. I suspect he is going to have to give up his martial arts and it's going be difficult for them both to adjust I think. It's not so bad having a broken back really. it sucks sometimes, especially when it's cold but I'm a stubborn son of a bitch and haven't let it hold me back and neither should he
