The Poetry of D/s - 1. flying

This poem vividly brings to the mind the experience, the moment and the release. You open the eyes of the reader. 

Can anyone show that BDSM or D/S relationship is more of love, than the lust or the torture we see, than this. The way you told that the pain is pleasure that sooth the soul was a marvellous thing. You have talent. Eyes that see through the core of a heart. Such a beauty. Very well done my friend. 

Lovely.

10 hours ago, WolfM said:

This is wonderful tim!!!

Thank You Wolfie ... 

9 hours ago, BHopper2 said:

A well written, and visually stimulating poem, tim. Great job.

Thanks very much, A.  I appreciate you reading and commenting. 

9 hours ago, BlindAmbition said:

Beautiful visual. The commands that bring focus, and the binding that brings peace and comfort.

thank you, jp.  something has been changing in me, it a good way. i think meeting all of Y/you who live this life have helped in that. Before there was only me, and then i met those here, and John and jamie, and i've grown i think in many way because of it.. xoxo

9 hours ago, mollyhousemouse said:

you have such a gift, tim

so many things i'd like to say, the thoughts are swirling and won't come together in any coherent fashion

i am speechless and breathless

 

 

thank you, molly ... as you say, let them marinate  

9 hours ago, MacGreg said:

What you illustrate is a bond that is palpable, with a vitalizing energy that envelops both handler and recipient. you describe it perfectly and beautifully, tim. May you fly always.

thank You Sir. You have helped this boy see, and i am so much better for it. it is a great gift,  and i am grateful, Sir.

9 hours ago, Reader1810 said:

Your description of these shared moments is beautiful in the peace and comfort that they bestow.  

 

 

Thank you, Reader!  i hope maybe more people will understand what D/s and BDSM can be

9 hours ago, Solus Magus said:

Sounds great! Good job tim!

thank you Solus, i appreciate you reading and your comment.

8 hours ago, Defiance19 said:

I see this unfold, almost with bated breath. Beautiful tim.... 

don't hold your breath...but i appreciate what you are saying .. thank you, Def xo

Just now, Mikiesboy said:

thank you Solus, i appreciate you reading and your comment.

I am also trying to learn to swerve into poetry. Raw emotions are really fascinating for me. It keeps me grounded to my inner humanity. I also made a few if you want to check it out. I want to learn from you, too!  

7 hours ago, MichaelS36 said:

you have always been a dream, my boy. but now as you allow Me, and the other Doms in your life to show you this Life, and you open you mind and body to each lesson,  you are discovering the peace, joy and fulfillment it brings. And you at peace and happy, brings fulfillment and joy to Me. A wonderful poem. And a wonderful home for them.

the more i open up to and learn from You, John and Mac Sirs, the more i learn and understand.  and in the silence so much is said.  thank You, MIchael xo

2 minutes ago, Solus Magus said:

I am also trying to learn to swerve into poetry. Raw emotions are really fascinating for me. It keeps me grounded to my inner humanity. I also made a few if you want to check it out. I want to learn from you, too!  

Solus your Effective Outlets, made me write this.  i tried now four times to post there, but i can't. i've written them out four times .. so here is my outlet and in the only form that works for me ... like my profile says; poetry is how i write my world .. i have for many years .. my earliest poetry from when i was a street boy/rent boy is here.. in my Street Words ...it has always been my outlet... tim

7 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

This poem vividly brings to the mind the experience, the moment and the release. You open the eyes of the reader. 

thank you, Parker .. i hope people will see what D/s can really be .. not what so many think it is.. xoxxo

7 hours ago, Emi GS said:

Can anyone show that BDSM or D/S relationship is more of love, than the lust or the torture we see, than this. The way you told that the pain is pleasure that sooth the soul was a marvellous thing. You have talent. Eyes that see through the core of a heart. Such a beauty. Very well done my friend. 

D/s and BDSM in the real world is so very far from what most people think, it has it's own beauty and poetry .. thank you for seeing that, Emi xo