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  • dkstories
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  • 09/08/2018
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Myr
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As noted at the start of this story, the conclusion of this story is not satisfactory.  This is the sort of thing that happens when readers drive an author past his breaking point.  Keep this in mind when you write comments, send PMs, and otherwise post about a story.

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Mature story contains dark themes involving graphic violence and taboo topics that may contain triggers for sensitive readers. Please do not read further if this bothers you.

Dawn of Tears - 33. Final Chapter

Well, after the Israeli incident, the history books pretty much tell the story from there. President Jacobs died in a nuclear blast, my brother and I helped usher in the Great Republic of God, and then twenty years later we helped overthrow that same government. I hope that the future brings you more joy. For now I'll end my life in bed, with the man I love.

I had wanted a better ending for this story, but after such a long delay enough readers have demanded I finish this story I decided to give them what they wanted.
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Butcher56

I’m sad that the story has to end, although I think the way that you ended it was good. Dylan knows that his brother passed away already even though no one has told him, it was because of the bond they shared that he knew the exact moment it happened. I’m proud of what Dylan, Henry and those who were bonded to him accomplished in just a few years including the deaths of the brother and sister who were the whole reason for the Great Oil Crisis. Thanks for such a great story. I like how Dylan decides to close out the memories of his and Henry’s accomplishments by saying that for now he’s going to just lie in bed with the man he loves. I have thoroughly enjoyed the story. Again Thank You for this great story.

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Al Norris

In the review section (the very front page of this story), Myr makes note that dkstories is no longer associated with GA, nor does Myr expect him to associate anytime in the future. Myr also tells us that he has no idea of any life-situation that dkstories may be in, or not.

 

Not having read this before (though I can't say why I haven't - I loved the Do-Over series), I have no idea of the amount of time that passed between chapter 32 and this one. I can only surmise that regardless of the time passage, enough readers became belligerent with Dan and this was the result.

 

As a reader, we more often than not, have no clue what's going on in an authors life. Real Life Issues? Writers block? We just don't know. Readers should therefor always be careful of what they ask of an author of FREE stories. We should also reflect on how we ask as well.

 

"[E]nough readers have demanded I finish this story I decided to give them what they wanted."

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mmike1969
9 hours ago, Billy Martin said:

Someone correct me if I'm wrong. DK passed away? I knew his partner and long time GA admin/mod passed, but I hadn't realized DK had as well.  Can anyone shed some light? Myr?

From Myr 

 

"dkstories is literally no longer with us.  I do not know his life status.  He left his works with us at Gay Authors and is never expected to return.  I have therefore not marked him as deceased as I don't know if he is or not."

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Billy Martin
On 9/9/2018 at 1:23 AM, mmike1969 said:

From Myr 

 

"dkstories is literally no longer with us.  I do not know his life status.  He left his works with us at Gay Authors and is never expected to return.  I have therefore not marked him as deceased as I don't know if he is or not."

 

Thank you Mike. At one time he activated another web page for his stories, I guess I shouldn't have deleted the saved page. I knew at the time GA had the rights to some, if not  most of his stories. After his partner died, I lost track of him.

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Sandbear

Very well written, prose excellent. I was however very disturbed over a total lack of understanding of the division between the two principle branches of Islam and their antipathy for each other, often leading to extreme violence. I am also surprised that any one who is obviously intelligent should have made a mistake all too common in the USA of mistaking the Biblical Philistines, an Aegean people brought in to Palestine by the Ancient Egyptians to act as a buffer between Egypt and the Hittites.  Palestinians on the other hand, are Arabs, almost 400 million in today's world, all of whom are Semites, and approximately 30% of whom are Christians. The conflict between Arabs and Israelis exists only since the 1940s. Prior to that the Arabs for centuries were the only people who gave Jews asylum and a safe haven and security, so no they have NOT been enemies for time immemorial. I am also surprised at the continuous error in thinking that the Iranians/Persians are members of the Arab race and culture. Persians/Iranians are NOT Semites, like the Arabs and the original Jews, they are Indo-Europeans and the original Aryans, who have a great deal shared antipathy with the Arabs.

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