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JUMP! NaPoWriMo 2022 - 1. Chapter 1

I will dash

into the ice cream place

and get us some tasty treats on the

first balmy day of spring, then we will meander

hand in hand to the fountain and share

multi-flavored kisses

with sprinkles.

While preparing for NaPoWriMo, I found out that I couldn't wait to try out this poetry form.
I like its fluency and lightness.
Thank you for reading my first attempt to write a skyscraper. I appreciate any form of reaction and or comment.
~Aditus
Copyright © 2022 Aditus; All Rights Reserved.
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1 hour ago, Parker Owens said:

I liked your skyscraper very much, especially the kisses with sprinkles! 

That was my favorite line too.  I really enjoyed this little ice cream excursion.  I'm looking forward to trying out the skyscraper form.  I'm also looking forward to reading what everyone comes up with for NaPoWriMo :) 

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11 hours ago, dughlas said:

I like this. I envision two young freckle faced lads indulging in the treats of spring, with sprinkles.

Yes, 🌈sprinkles! I'm happy you like it, dughlas.

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10 hours ago, Lux Apollo said:

All I have to say is YUM. :)

What's more to say? Thank you, Lux!

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On 3/31/2022 at 9:48 PM, Parker Owens said:

I liked your skyscraper very much, especially the kisses with sprinkles! 

As you are a skyscraper expert, it makes me very happy you like it. Almost everything becomes better with sprinkles. Thank you for your comment, Parker. :)

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8 hours ago, Valkyrie said:

That was my favorite line too.  I really enjoyed this little ice cream excursion.  I'm looking forward to trying out the skyscraper form.  I'm also looking forward to reading what everyone comes up with for NaPoWriMo :) 

Yes, exciting times ahead. :)

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Super cute! 

Love the sense of changing pace throughout the poem. 

Rush of bubbling excitement

Meandering pause to enjoy time well spent 

Flutter of sweet kisses...with sprinkles😳

Enjoyed Molto!

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I didn't know you were doing this again, Adi, but I really enjoyed your skyscraper. Nice way to start... sweet and upbeat. I tried the sky scraper recently as well. :) 

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A very cute poem that brought back memories of my little brother and me going to Dairy Queen.  The nice things about poems like this are the memories they evoke. 

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Very nice, thanks. I think you are one of the most original and creative persons on this site.  🤗

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15 hours ago, Gary L said:

Very nice, thanks. I think you are one of the most original and creative persons on this site.  🤗

:yes:  I completely agree!  

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