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Fireworks & Rain 9. My Uni-Verse

   (7 reviews)
Genres: Poetry,
Sub-genres: Limerick, Free-Verse, Sonnet, Lyric, Rhyming, Mixed Forms

Five poems concerning various anniversaries.

Copyright © 2022 Aditus; All Rights Reserved.
  • Signature Author
  • 09/15/2022 (Updated: 09/22/2022)
  • 5 Chapters
  • 434 Words
  • 17,048 Views
  • 112 Comments
  • Teen
  • Complete

Story Recommendations (6 members)

  • Action-Packed 0
  • Great Pacing 1
  • Great Characters 2
  • Character Growth 0
  • Dialog / Banter 0
  • Plot Twists 0
  • Beautiful Writing 0
  • Immersive World 0
  • Satisfying Ending 0
  • Fresh / Original 4
  • Counldn't Put It Down 6
  • Suspenseful 0
  • Gave Me Chills 2
  • Funny 0
  • Feel-Good 2
  • Heartwarming 0
  • Emotional Impact 4
  • Thought-Provoking 0
  • Romantic Chemistry 0
  • Smoldering Chemistry 0
  • Love 8
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Table of Contents
  • 1. Jubilee
    • 59 Words
    • 1,978 Views
    • 22 Comments
  • 2. Rant
    • 106 Words
    • 1,837 Views
    • 21 Comments
  • 3. Legacy
    • 74 Words
    • 1,297 Views
    • 19 Comments
  • 4. Somewhere
    • 113 Words
    • 1,341 Views
    • 22 Comments
  • 5. Dates
    • 82 Words
    • 6,815 Views
    • 28 Comments

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Gary L

Gary L 24,008

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

Do NOT read unless you are willing to be moved emotionally in different directions. These short verses are powerfully written by Aditus, well up to the high standard we expect.

if you have come across this review by chance and haven’t thought of trying the poetry on this site then please try. I have found it very fulfilling, stimulating and, at times, very moving. Hopefully that is what Aditus wants.

Response from the author:

Ha, you really shocked me with 'Do not read' until I reached unless... Thank you, for your review, Gary. (I know, I know my commas are all over the place again.)

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raven1

raven1 70,324

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

Five cleverly written short poems expressing the feelings related to both large and small anniversaries in our lives.  There is sadness, joy and hope highlighted in the different poems.  Well worth the few minutes required to read these beautiful poems.  

Response from the author:

Thank you, Terry. :thankyou:

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Doha

Doha 20,067

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

A collection of 5 poems, Fireworks and Rain will leave you breathless and emotions churning.

Touching on the full gambit of human emotion, these poems speak to the heart and soul. 

I am so glad I read them. 

Response from the author:

Thank you for the great review, Doha and letting other readers what you think about my poems. :)

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Mancunian

Mancunian 27,144

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

We are often told simple is best, well this is simplicity at its best. Five simple short poems that can help you remember or make you think, or even both depending on your own experience. I found reading this a thought provoking and enjoyable experience.

Response from the author:

Thank you, Mancunian for sharing your thoughts in this review, it's much appreciated.

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