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A New Life and a New Home 1. The Tampa Chronicles The Tampa Chronicles - Expanded Reading

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Sixteen-year-old Brayon came out to his Progressive parents, but they did the one thing he didn't expect. They disowned him and kicked him out. This is his story.

This story started as a Writing Prompt exercise for Prompt #480. However, it turned into something more.
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Story Recommendations (5 members)

  • Action Packed 2
  • Addictive/Pacing 2
  • Characters 5
  • Chills 0
  • Cliffhanger 1
  • Compelling 0
  • Feel-Good 0
  • Humor 0
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 1
  • Unique 1
  • World Building 0

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  • 1. A New Life
    • 2,303 Words
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    • 43 Comments

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AC Benus

· Edited by AC Benus

   6 of 6 members found this review helpful 6 / 6 members

This had me hooked! There's a style here of 'just the facts, ma'am' that's balanced and nuanced. I was drawn right in, like I was watching it happen and not reading about it at all. 

 

Read it for yourself, and you won't regret it.

Response from the author:

Thank you, very much AC. I appreciate the review.

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Wesley8890

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

I loved this! I just wish there was a bit more to it. It's a great read and the first line easily caught my attention

Response from the author:

Thank you for the review. I appreciate it.

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chris191070

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

Fantastic story, it drew me right in for an excellent read. I just wish it had been longer.

if you want a great short story give it a read.

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Thank you for the Review. I appreciate it.

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