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My Son 2. The Tampa Chronicles

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Adam Smith is a successful businessman, who recently came home to Tampa, Fl. Retired at age 38, living in a newly constructed house, he feels like he's set for a new chapter in his life, with plans to set up a Micro-Brewery.

 

That all changes when he gets a call from the Florida Department of Children and Families.

Dedicated to @MichaelS36, for inspiring me to write something different, and outside my comfort zone.

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  • Addictive/Pacing 2
  • Characters 2
  • Cliffhanger 1
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  • Tearjerker 1
  • Unique 1
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Mikiesboy

   6 of 6 members found this review helpful 6 / 6 members

When @BHopper2 said he wanted a little challenge and he was given suggestion, he took the challenge and ran with it.

 

His efforts took him out of his usual comfort zone and he came up with a lovely story. It felt real and honest to me. It was (and is always) a pleasure to work with BHopper2.

Great short piece worth reading. Stands on its own, but this could easily be the start of a nice book.

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Thanks, Bro, for the review. It is always good to work with you.

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JeffreyL

   6 of 6 members found this review helpful 6 / 6 members

BHopper2 has written a most enjoyable short story! Adam is thirty-eight and finds out he has a son who is a teenager. An interesting plot, well-drawn characters, and realistic dialogue take us through the joys and fears of meeting your child as a teen. This story is complete in one "chapter," but I hope the author chooses to write more about these characters.

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Thank you for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

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KayDeeMac

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

Excellent story!  I really enjoyed getting to know Adam and Rob. 

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Thank you very much for the review. I'm glad you loved the story. 

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Boybig007

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

I just read this book last night, I loved it. I got butterflies in my stomach and ups and downs while reading it. Thank you !

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Thank you, very much for reading, and reviewing my story. I appreciate the feedback, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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chris191070

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

An amazing story about 38 year old Adam who discovers he has a teenage son and all the trials and tribulations that are caused by the son’s grandparents. Well worth a read.

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Thank you for the review, Chris.

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