The Art of Being Gay

OMG! I love this story, so happy to have founded, to bad I'm cought up and have to wait for more chapters love Kendra just the best mom and more on his way of helping Roy. Chad his the best.... he is trying to be there but even if his notice his fellings for Roy is keeping his distences...and Peterson OMG "Ï'm Elton Jonh Bi", lol... ans are we going to find out his first name...and hope he sees the waiter soon.... lol to much..sorry about the spelling english not my first lenguage lol but read you soon

On 10/19/2014 05:21 PM, Afrodita79 said:

OMG! I love this story, so happy to have founded, to bad I'm cought up and have to wait for more chapters love Kendra just the best mom and more on his way of helping Roy. Chad his the best.... he is trying to be there but even if his notice his fellings for Roy is keeping his distences...and Peterson OMG "Ï'm Elton Jonh Bi", lol... ans are we going to find out his first name...and hope he sees the waiter soon.... lol to much..sorry about the spelling english not my first lenguage lol but read you soon

I love the story. My only criticism is that chapters are too short

On 12/07/2014 08:48 PM, Ben Highlander said:

I love the story. My only criticism is that chapters are too short

I did love the Elbows and Knees chapter. I guess I should have expanded on the review. I think it's important to show that not all new relationships are going to flow so smoothly their first time together (like in other stories or in the movies). I'm sure there are plenty of couples who started out bumping into each other and elbowing each other their first times together. And in the end, we now know Roy and Chad figured it out.

It was definitely touching and very sad when Roy was thinking all those negative thoughts, thinking he just ruined the friendship with Chad, and how Chad was going to leave now like everyone else did. His nightmares certainly didn't help that any.

I'm thrilled Roy was able to put his fears on the back-burner and try again.

On 09/23/2016 02:03 PM, Lisa said:

I did love the Elbows and Knees chapter. I guess I should have expanded on the review. I think it's important to show that not all new relationships are going to flow so smoothly their first time together (like in other stories or in the movies). I'm sure there are plenty of couples who started out bumping into each other and elbowing each other their first times together. And in the end, we now know Roy and Chad figured it out.

 

It was definitely touching and very sad when Roy was thinking all those negative thoughts, thinking he just ruined the friendship with Chad, and how Chad was going to leave now like everyone else did. His nightmares certainly didn't help that any.

 

I'm thrilled Roy was able to put his fears on the back-burner and try again.

I'm glad you made your comments. I love this chapter and think your comments point out issues. This story was one of my favorites. (Randy doesn't like it) I await your further suggestions. I think it's powerful how we feel the ebb and flow of the emotions. Thanks Losa!

I just read your reply to Afrodita's review. Peterson's fist name

On 09/23/2016 03:39 PM, Timothy M. said:

I just read your reply to Afrodita's review. Peterson's fist name

Lol! That's what happens when using an iPad to answer reviews!