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The Prompt You Say! - 11. Prompt 133 - A Moment in Time

First loves are messy, wonderful, disastrous, and unforgettable. They teach you, they wreck you, and they make you stronger. Choose any form you of writing you like- poetry, the short story, a journal entry, or even a news article and put down all the things you went through or a character you wrote went through in their first love.

A Moment in Time

He was taller, thinner, but attractive in a Texan way

Slow talking, sweet kissing, tender loving gentleman

Who, with barely a word, stole my heart that first day

And never let me forget it during our time together.

 

We were opposites, of that you can be sure.

Him the gentle giant, me the big bear in a glass world.

We came together for but the blink of an eye

But lord he kissed me till my toes curled.

 

Our time was just too short but isn’t that life

A visit, a span, a slice of time gone too fast

However fast it was at least there was no strife

And the memories are bittersweet to recall

 

Red hot passion to cooler flames of friendship

The passing of time and moving away from one another

Time passes faster than you once thought it did

While love finds one, the wait begins for the other.

 

Memories remain to fill in long span between then and now

But a first love remembered and a kiss beneath a holly bough

A treasure worth the time, a pain sweetly earned.

So my shot at retelling a first love. Taken from my past it is a bittersweet memory.
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asamvav111

Poetry bares it all. You can not hide to poerty. Beautiful, sad and honest to the core. Captured the essence of first love so well. Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece of private emotion with us.

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On 05/14/2012 04:54 PM, asamvav111 said:
Poetry bares it all. You can not hide to poerty. Beautiful, sad and honest to the core. Captured the essence of first love so well. Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece of private emotion with us.
Poetry has a tendency to show everything in what is and is not said. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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K.C.

A beautiful memory of first love, most are angry and bitter over love lost but this was amazing and sensual.

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On 05/15/2012 12:59 PM, K.C. said:
A beautiful memory of first love, most are angry and bitter over love lost but this was amazing and sensual.
Well some relationships are hard to look back on but some are just bittersweet. John was just hard not to like and remember fondly.
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On 05/17/2012 04:03 PM, JOeKEool said:
Nice. A nice memory and nicely written. Thank you,very enjoyable.
Thank you Joe. Funny, usually my poetry is dark but not so much this time.
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