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All In - 27. Chapter 27

Hope this sort of wraps up some loose ends. This is also written from the first person POV of Jason, so it's a little different, but for some reason it flowed out that way easier.
(Sorry for the POV error! It's been fixed!)

Chapter 27--Epilogue

 

So... there's my story of how I ended up going All In with a kid who I thought would drive me nuts. Well, he actually does drive me nuts, but in a good way, a normal teen way. He is finally opening up, feeling secure with his new freedoms. The therapist is helping with that a lot. So is Michael. Especially Michael.

After staying at my father's home for a few months, we moved into a house across town that had enough acreage to build a barn for Serenity so that Devyn didn't have to have to board her at another stable anymore. It was still close enough to Michael that the boys could get together nearly every day.

Brad's estate is still locked up in the courts in probate because he obviously didn't have a will, and it seems like it is going to probably take at least a year for that all to be sorted out totally. Sheriff Marlin said that Devyn would be inheriting the mansion eventually. But it doesn't really matter. Devyn doesn't want anything to do with anything that was Brad's--at least that's what he says right now. Maybe in a couple more years when he's able to put more of it behind him, he might go back to the estate. Maybe when he's ready to be on his own. Who knows? He doesn't have to decide now.

Fortunately for Devyn, his mother and father had set up a trust fund when Devyn was born that was now worth several million dollars which he can access when he turns 18. A little money is allocated from it for his care to his guardian--who knows what Brad did with the money. But I've put part of what they've handed me aside in an account for Devyn to use as spending money and the rest aside for any emergencies--hopefully there won't be any.

So, at least Devyn will be okay, if he decides to move out when he comes of age. I kinda hope he'll stay, though. I'm getting used to having him around.

I suspect that Brad was just waiting for Devyn's 18th birthday to get total control of that money too. It makes me a little uneasy thinking of what might have happened to Devyn after that, especially knowing all that Brad did to get control of his father's money. Somehow, I think he would have had Devyn sign some papers putting him as the new beneficiary on the trust and then ... something might have happened to Devyn. Or maybe he was just keeping Devyn around until his fucking drug dealers tired of him... Just thinking about it makes me want to hit something, well someone... but, anyway...

Sheriff Marlin has kept us informed about the others involved in Brad's drug dealings. They managed to catch two of the dealers--Crantz and Pollinger--who both were charged with drug possession as well as with sexual assault of a minor. The others seem to have disappeared into the wind, the sheriff said. Sam Pratt and Nelson Rainer were charged with murder, aggravated assault, battery of a child, false imprisonment, a bunch of drug charges, accessory to... well you get the picture.

In short, Devyn doesn't have to worry about them anymore.

We did have an issue with Dr. Hembry in the hospital, though. The man tried to come in, claiming to be Devyn's physician to the nurses on duty. Fortunately, the duty nurse didn't allow him in without authorization from Dr. Marks. Devyn finally admitted what the man had done to him--which if I had known before I probably would be facing assault charges myself. Dr. Marks ordered an investigation into Dr. Hembry, and based on complaints by other patients as well as indications that the man had deliberately messed with Devyn's vocal cords during his tonsillectomy, the man was promptly arrested as well.

With Hembry in jail and the rest of Brad's thugs in jail or run off, our lives, especially Devyn's finally settled in. Chris and Trent, unfortunately, were also back in jail for their involvement with Brad and breaking the terms of their parole. But they should be out in a couple years.

Lyle, well, Lyle is another story. Devyn actually likes Lyle (fortunately for me), and he was probably the only other person who actually cared for the kid at all--well, before me ... and Michael, of course. Since Lyle and I are seeing each other practically every night, it's a good thing that Devyn likes him. If he hadn't, then, well, Lyle and I probably wouldn't be together. I just couldn't have done that to Devyn after everything else he'd been through.

So, Devyn's now almost done with his GED courses. It was extremely hard work, but he was fiercely determined. It was one more way to feel he'd taken power back from Brad's hold over his life. He's been looking into colleges, and I think he's really looking into either Art or possibly Biology, so he can do something with horses. I think he's leaning toward Santa Ana College since that's where Michael is going. At the moment, he's wanting to stay here during his first year and commute to the campus. Not sure he feels he's ready to be out on his own yet. His therapist says that I'm his safety net.

That makes me smile.

So I've been trying to make up for some of his 'missed childhood' lately. We've visited several theme parks, gone fishing (which I hadn't done in forever, and I'm just glad we didn't actually catch anything--not sure what we would have done with it), hiking, even tried skiing, but Devyn didn't care for falling down so much. He loves the beach, but now he prefers to go with Michael--alone. Go figure.

Teaching the kid to drive was a whole new experience and nearly took ten years off my life; but it was worth it for the complete look of utter joy on his face when I gave him the keys to his own used car, and he took off in the little sedan for the first time--to see his boyfriend, of course.

So, there you have it. The little deuce got paired up (and, well, so did I!), and I have never regretted going All In with the kid who'd had everyone else in his life fold on him.

Thank you everyone reading and all your reviews (and for rating the story as well!) I'm so glad that so many have enjoyed reading it. I will work on a Brad's point of view, as I think that would be rather interesting (evil thoughts!), so if you follow the story, you should get an update notice when it happens.
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I don't think there ws a problem with the change of POV at all. It was a lovely wind up to a rollercoaster of a story. Hope you have some more up your sleeve

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The POV change was perfect. In fact perfect sums up the resolutions over the final three chapters. I had hoped that they could give Devyn his voice back but I guess that would be being greedy. He has Michael, who accepts everything, and a guardian plus one, who is like the big brother he never had. I would call that poetic justice. Thanks for an enthralling story...Cheers...Gary

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thanks for taking the time to write such a wonderful story......it had just about a lil of everything in it and its was a good read so thanks

Bob

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Excellent story. Jason's POV was an great way to wrap things up. I'm happy that Devyn has found some happiness and a "big brother" who loves him and wants to keep him safe. Thank you for taking the time to write it! Hopefully you have another story or two on the horizon.

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I love the POV change, it makes it that little bit more personal, and that's exactly what this chapter needed :). The only thing I noticed was that you slipped back into third person for a minute when talking about Devyn's trust fund:

 

But Jason put it aside in an account so .

Other than that (insignificant) little detail, the story was absolutely flawless :D It's definitely one of my all time favorites, and I'm looking forward to coming back and rereading every once in a while :). This isn't a story I'll ever forget, but it's good enough to reread anyway :D. I was meaning to write a longer review, but after reading that I've got too many things crashing through my mind to write coherently :lol:. Anyway, thanks so much for writing such a masterpiece! Reading this has been an amazing experience, and I'm looking forward to the Brad insert :evil::lol:.

Oh, I kinda wish Kieran had woken up so he could go to jail too :lol: Bastard knew about what was happening to Devyn and did nothing, letting him go outside doesn't make up for that at all.

Congrats on an amazing story! Definitely one of the best :)

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On 11/25/2014 09:47 AM, faxity said:
I love the POV change, it makes it that little bit more personal, and that's exactly what this chapter needed :). The only thing I noticed was that you slipped back into third person for a minute when talking about Devyn's trust fund:

 

But Jason put it aside in an account so .

Other than that (insignificant) little detail, the story was absolutely flawless :D It's definitely one of my all time favorites, and I'm looking forward to coming back and rereading every once in a while :). This isn't a story I'll ever forget, but it's good enough to reread anyway :D. I was meaning to write a longer review, but after reading that I've got too many things crashing through my mind to write coherently :lol:. Anyway, thanks so much for writing such a masterpiece! Reading this has been an amazing experience, and I'm looking forward to the Brad insert :evil::lol:.

Oh, I kinda wish Kieran had woken up so he could go to jail too :lol: Bastard knew about what was happening to Devyn and did nothing, letting him go outside doesn't make up for that at all.

Congrats on an amazing story! Definitely one of the best :)

Oops! Thanks for pointing that out! And thank you for reviewing with such detail all the time; they definitely help me improve the story. So glad you enjoyed it!
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On 11/25/2014 09:44 AM, LitLover said:
Excellent story. Jason's POV was an great way to wrap things up. I'm happy that Devyn has found some happiness and a "big brother" who loves him and wants to keep him safe. Thank you for taking the time to write it! Hopefully you have another story or two on the horizon.
So glad you enjoyed it! I've very much enjoyed reading all of your reviews throughout the story! Thanks for taking the time to review.
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On 11/25/2014 07:47 AM, fiedlerbob101 said:
thanks for taking the time to write such a wonderful story......it had just about a lil of everything in it and its was a good read so thanks

Bob

Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for all your reviews! :)
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On 11/25/2014 07:16 AM, Headstall said:
The POV change was perfect. In fact perfect sums up the resolutions over the final three chapters. I had hoped that they could give Devyn his voice back but I guess that would be being greedy. He has Michael, who accepts everything, and a guardian plus one, who is like the big brother he never had. I would call that poetic justice. Thanks for an enthralling story...Cheers...Gary
I know, many people wanted Devyn to get his voice back, but that would probably be a little too much. I'm so glad you thought the change in POV worked; I was a little worried about that.

 

Thank you very much for all your reviews throughout the story. So glad you enjoyed it.

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On 11/25/2014 05:14 AM, chrislucas191070 said:
Great chapter to end what has been a fantastic story.
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! ;)
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On 11/25/2014 05:11 AM, Nephylim said:
I don't think there ws a problem with the change of POV at all. It was a lovely wind up to a rollercoaster of a story. Hope you have some more up your sleeve
Oh, good. I was a little worried about how the change in POV would be taken. Thank you so much for all of your insightful reviews!
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Another great story and a wonderful ending. I almost want to see what else can go on. I mean there has been a few loose ends running around out there, but as this is, I'm a fan.

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On 11/25/2014 11:16 AM, Fantasyboy69 said:
Another great story and a wonderful ending. I almost want to see what else can go on. I mean there has been a few loose ends running around out there, but as this is, I'm a fan.
Hehe, I think we were reviewing each other's stories at the same time!

Thank you very much for your reviews. I can see where more could be added (and maybe in some sort of oneshots I might come back to them, just for fun). Glad you enjoyed it.

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I'm in agreement with the majority...'Best Story' winner! Great job...though I would've loved to have seen a bit more development of the love between Jase and Lyle in the end...to also act as a model of love for Devyn and Michael, since they are both still young!! But I will never be arrogant enough to try and tell someone with the brilliant skills you possess...how to write!! :worship: You rocked this story...thank you!!

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great ending. I enjoyed the development of the relationship between jase and Devyn. the ends were wrapped up. the only thing I'd have liked would have been for jase to say he finally told lyle he loved him....because i'm a sucker for a hea, but also b/c his road to opening his heart to lyle reminds me of Devyn's need to open himself up to others. the funny thing is that he was able to open his heart up to Michael easily despite what he went through.

very well done!!! look forward to more of your work....soon? :)

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Excellent story, Mom, just excellent!! :)

 

You are such a talented author, the story was so well written, the characters were wonderful, well, you know, except for all the bad, child-abusing murderers, and you kept me riveted from the first word of the first chapter.

 

Reading the last chapter in Jason's POV was great b/c it gave us insight into what he personally is feeling. I hope things continue to look up for Devyn; I'm so happy to learn he'll be going to school for art or biology. And he'll have Michael there and he'll hopefully make some more friends and learn to open up and trust others again.

 

Terrific story, Mom. Again, I can't enough about it! lol

 

I look forward to reading the insert about Brad, and other fabulous stories I know you'll write. :)

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On 11/26/2014 04:12 PM, Lisa said:
Excellent story, Mom, just excellent!! :)

 

You are such a talented author, the story was so well written, the characters were wonderful, well, you know, except for all the bad, child-abusing murderers, and you kept me riveted from the first word of the first chapter.

 

Reading the last chapter in Jason's POV was great b/c it gave us insight into what he personally is feeling. I hope things continue to look up for Devyn; I'm so happy to learn he'll be going to school for art or biology. And he'll have Michael there and he'll hopefully make some more friends and learn to open up and trust others again.

 

Terrific story, Mom. Again, I can't enough about it! lol

 

I look forward to reading the insert about Brad, and other fabulous stories I know you'll write. :)

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Hope the ending wrapped it up for the most part for everyone.

Thank you so much for all of your reviews throughout the story; they really to see how others view the story. ;)

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On 11/26/2014 03:01 PM, loveseeker said:
Aww.. Great ending! Happy ending for all of them. I enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for sharing this to us. :)
Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it!
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On 11/25/2014 02:39 PM, Cannd said:
great ending. I enjoyed the development of the relationship between jase and Devyn. the ends were wrapped up. the only thing I'd have liked would have been for jase to say he finally told lyle he loved him....because i'm a sucker for a hea, but also b/c his road to opening his heart to lyle reminds me of Devyn's need to open himself up to others. the funny thing is that he was able to open his heart up to Michael easily despite what he went through.

very well done!!! look forward to more of your work....soon? :)

I just want to thank you again, so very much, for all of your 'beta-like' reviews. They helped so much with the Neko story and have been so insightful here as well. Thank you, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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