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The Passenger on Platform Six Premium

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The journey of a lifetime starts with one train ticket.

Owen, nineteen and single, is finally making his journey to coming out, but this is far more difficult and complicated than the train journey he has to take from his small home town to London, the only place where he feels he can come out. What has led him to such an extreme move and what will he find when he arrives?

This story was edited by GA member @Marty and I owe him a very, very big thank you. Please check out his profile and follow him here!

Copyright © 2019 Drew Payne; All Rights Reserved.

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pvtguy

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

A young man takes the courageous step to start a life for himself, a step which is filled with both excitement and dread.  It does end with one wanting to know what comes next, but that is not the point of the story:  it is an encouragement to take that step even with trepidation to take charge of one's life.

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quokka

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

Good story, but the ending is a little too abrupt.

Response from the author:

This is very much in my style, stop and leave them wating more.

I just find that neat and tidy endings go against the core of my being.

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