Dissonance

A beautiful story of discovery, redemption, acceptance, and loving. We never know where and when we find the one. Travis and Ben couldn't be anymore different. Yet, they compliment and complete each other. Written with brutal honesty at times. A story with characters you will care for, and a beautiful Colorado backdrop.

I burned through what is posted so far, eating into my sleep, forcing me to feel everything the characters do.  I love the descriptions.  That's a place I need to do better in my own work, and reading this makes me want to improve that aspect of my writing.

But, this isn't about me.

I love this work.  I love how flawed both men and the people around them are.  They're deep, complex, at odds with themselves and with one another as well.  The tender moments are so pronounced because they're held up against the rawness of the rest.  It makes them special in a way I'm not sure I can really explain.

I am hopeful that you'll come back to this, @MacGreg.  The story is worth reading and consequently, it's worth telling.

Thank you for writing.