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Yup And still the "little woman" is alone doing all the childcare. We're going all 1950s here. I don't think Jett and April have held Jay since Carina moved in

Jett and April may be twenty but they are acting like thirteen year olds. Even Hamlets only soliloquies only lasted so long with his indecisions. Should I tell him... but what if he.... I'll wait till he..... Holy Kpop boy band Batman !!!

a few little issues with this chapter: (1) Maggie is a a guest in Nash and Jarran's home but ends up doing food prep. Who assigns their mom kitchen duty in their adult home (2) Bill's opinion is sought and valued but again Maggie's in the kitchen (3) All life's problems are fixed with money. Millions are now getting deposited in to their accounts so they are set. Life should be about your own accomplishments. It reads a little like property theology > if you are good god enriches you, ... therefore the poor are not worthy and God forbid we have universal healthcare

Let me get this straight - whose house is it anyway. Jett's!! I'm confused

is Jett Jeffrey Epstein's nickname? or may be Harvey Weinstein in disguise?

A REALLY solid chapter that doesn't rely on sex to carry the story line 👍👍👍

ohh, back to the story line for a moment. Jack may be only sixteen but he has only acknowledged being gay and acted on it for about a week or two. I can fully understand him not being ready to "fall in love" or at least not being ready to decide who to fall in love with yet. His head must still be spinning and not just from the concussion. thanks as always Ronyx Be well

Jack's Mom is behaving terribly. However being angry at Jack doesn't necessarily mean that she doesn't love him. It could be, but not necessarily. She could be very conflicted and showing her feelings (love, confusion, and everything else) thorough anger. She may come around. She may also lose her family over this if she doesn't. Great for Ronxy for making us wait to find out. That's where the drama lies

Wonderful chapter! I don't know Ace if you are winding this story up or whether Ezra isn't finished trying to dominate Artie. Either way, it's a wonderful ride. thx

"I couldn't find the time to create a full length seasonal offering this year, so I hope this little short story will suffice. Would love to hear your comments and suggestions." We are delighted that you offered us this little bit of Christmas magic. many Thanks

Congratulations Ace on another great chapter. Based on the comments above, you got us all exactly where you want us. These characters are obviously VERY real to your readers!!

The story IS so good. The comments alone support this by the very ferocity of the feelings expressed by readers to the actions of fictional characters. Readers are even threatening them ! - well maybe that's not good, but the story is

“That bitch has some explaining to do. If something is wrong with my babies I’m gonna smack a bitch.” Kaleb said hanging half out the door looking up and down the empty corridor. “Where the hell did she disappear too?” Language, language !! Really - not cool !

Are Levi Lincoln four, fourteen or forty? We span the range of Candy Court presided over by Judge Moody to adolescent teens exploring relationships and dealing with weighty matters of loyalties, empathy and family support in high stress moments.

Franklin looked up at Doug from the floor, holding his face after Doug landed a punch Sugar Ray Leonard would have been proud of. Was this really necessary? There are many ways to create drama and get and hold the reader's attention. Someone hitting their grandfather is not a great way to do so. It cheapens the story, for this reader, but also is inconsistent with how a good Parent, which Blu's character certainly is, would act, especially in front of their children. Anyone can be violent, for good or for evil. Quiet strength is far more powerful than bravado.