So Frosty sent me a review of my first chapter of my new story I'm writing. I have to say in some respects I'm a bit garbled with what I want to present, when I want to present it, and how I should do it - well.

I'm not trying to put down any of the authors I've had immense pleasure of reading through their works. However, I believe I like to keep my stories a bit more grounded, a little less extraordinary, with a bit more real-life scenarios - where not only lives are at stake, but money, family, and "common" tragedies creep up at the worst moments and sneak up on you when you least expect or want it.

At the same time, I'm not trying to write a pure sob story that's just completely emo.

This will be interesting as the main character, who will have a name very similar to a Hollywood Star and would never grow up without not hearing the same jokes about his name day in and day out... interact with his own growth process, will take a toll on himself as he begins a long introspection and reevaluation of his life decisions.

Not to give anything away because... well... let's face it I'm writing Chapter 2 at the moment... lol... I'm going to bet that the self-realization will begin a new genre of stories I hope to be writing in the future.

Fixing My Destiny.

~Jay

To my wonderful Editor + Beta Reader Frosty: zomfg you're the best <3