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What an unusual story line.

 

I like it in a weird kinda way. I will have to check out the rest of your work now to find out if you are truly gifted or truly something else.

 

I still haven't figured out how to "favorite" a hosted author or his story. but if you post it here as a new chapter or in the announcement area I should get it.

 

I'm ready for another chapter.

 

An interesting style as well.

 

It seems this could be the boy who dreamed he was a butterfly, dreaming he was a boy.

 

What ever it is, I'm in.

Posted

Oh, I like it. It's so sick and twisted. I love sick and twisted! I can imagine that there'll be some BDSM later on. Gregor says he doesn't like guys, but yet he really seems to like some of them at least. Good start, Carl!

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Who said all the great plays have already been written!

 

I can safely say that I have never seen a story line anywhere near what I just read. I thnk I had a gaping pie hole from beginning to end.:great:

 

I honestly figured that Gregor would have to convince The Master to make it with the demon to make them one again. Then and only then could he, Greggor get laid. :funny: However, the hetero transvestite, bisexual Lesbian, occasionally transgendered, hermit, :unsure: was an interesting touch. :blink:

 

So . . . Carl, Are you by chance related to the brothers grimm? :huh:

 

Well done! ;)

Posted

This was definitely an unorthodox approach to magical fantasy. My favorite character was Harold. He was a bit twisted, but he was so hilarious. The whole sex with a ghost thing was off the charts. It was a well-written story! My only beef... It wasn't as long as I would have liked. I understand why it wasn't, but I still wanted more.

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