[CarlHoliday] The Words Will Set Us Free

[CarlHoliday]

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[sat8997]

Glad to see this one start, Carl.

[ricky]

What an unusual story line.

 

I like it in a weird kinda way. I will have to check out the rest of your work now to find out if you are truly gifted or truly something else.

 

I still haven't figured out how to "favorite" a hosted author or his story. but if you post it here as a new chapter or in the announcement area I should get it.

 

I'm ready for another chapter.

 

An interesting style as well.

 

It seems this could be the boy who dreamed he was a butterfly, dreaming he was a boy.

 

What ever it is, I'm in.

[Tiger]

Oh, I like it. It's so sick and twisted. I love sick and twisted! I can imagine that there'll be some BDSM later on. Gregor says he doesn't like guys, but yet he really seems to like some of them at least. Good start, Carl!

[ricky]

Who said all the great plays have already been written!

 

I can safely say that I have never seen a story line anywhere near what I just read. I thnk I had a gaping pie hole from beginning to end.

 

I honestly figured that Gregor would have to convince The Master to make it with the demon to make them one again. Then and only then could he, Greggor get laid. However, the hetero transvestite, bisexual Lesbian, occasionally transgendered, hermit, was an interesting touch.

 

So . . . Carl, Are you by chance related to the brothers grimm?

 

Well done!

[Tiger]

This was definitely an unorthodox approach to magical fantasy. My favorite character was Harold. He was a bit twisted, but he was so hilarious. The whole sex with a ghost thing was off the charts. It was a well-written story! My only beef... It wasn't as long as I would have liked. I understand why it wasn't, but I still wanted more.