There once was love!

[Remijay]

Hey all this story iz new, i want to know if ya'll like it. i have approval of one but i want to know if the rest of ya'll like it.

 

This forum or Topic whatever you want to call it is for Comments, Suggestions, Feedback, umm just whatever you think about it really...Happy commenting

 

Drop me a line Remijay

 

http://www.gayauthor...ry.php?sid=1751

 

This story revolves around Thomas and hes in love with his best friend, but he doesnt know if his friend will except him or not. I would say he would but Thomas doesnt know that yet, thats at the way end though.

Yea i know i just gave away a spoiler but the good thing is you dont know when or where its going to take place.

Throughout this story Thomas and some acquaintance's will have some fun...IF you will.. ~_O---~_O ( *wink *wink) LOL...

So anyways hopefully you GA people will read, there is some twists and turns.

Edited September 28, 2010 by Remijay

[Welshdude]

Nice start dude:) What a way to end the first chapter ya big meanie XD. Thomas and Kieth seem cute, look forward to chapter 2.

[Remijay]

Nice start dude:) What a way to end the first chapter ya big meanie XD. Thomas and Kieth seem cute, look forward to chapter 2.

 

 

 

LOL yea i know i ended on bad terms but wait for Chapter 2 its gets better! Thanks for the comment!

 

 

[Remijay]

https://www.gayauthors.org/efiction/viewstory.php?sid=1751&textsize=0&chapter=2

 

As the story changes so will the characters, no-body stays the same. Every grows!!!

 

I dont have alot of Feedback for this story so hopefully, while the chapters come people will be encouraged to come take a look and comment.

 

Have fun ((Hugz)) Remijay

[Remijay]

Well what did you guys think about Chapter 2?

Also did you guys think, that i would let my two favorite stars have sex!? LOl not going to happen, but soon it will i promise!

https://www.gayauthors.org/efiction/viewstory.php?sid=1751&textsize=0&chapter=3

Write down your thoughts of this Chapter? What do you Guy's think about Eric and Tom have sex in the next one? Find out next time!!!

IT might be steamy!

((Hugz)) Remijay

[Remijay]

Sorry its taking forever, to upload another chapter, its getting edited right now. So soon it will be posted!

 

My read count for this story is 1255 and out of that only 7 reviews, either people dont like it or they just read it and move on...I know dont stress over it.

 

Well i am, and its getting retarded, i know im bitching right now. Thats me! hehehe well not always, only about the stuff that matters.

 

Hopefully soon the chapter will be posted, after that I'm taking 2 weeks off of writing to collect myself.

 

Have fun and be safe! ((Hugs--Kizzes))

[Remijay]

I know its been awhile sorry it took so long, but today im posting 2 new chapters to make up for it.....

 

Have fun with them and leave me some comments, concerns, questions. I love feedback of any kind...

 

Hugz--Kizzes Remijay

 

 

https://www.gayauthors.org/efiction/viewstory.php?sid=1751&chapter=6

 

https://www.gayauthors.org/efiction/viewstory.php?sid=1751&textsize=0&chapter=7

 

Thnx ttys <3

[Anya]

Hey Remijay,

 

I just started on your story and I really like it! I hope you keep writing

Also...do you already knwo how many chapters there are gonna be?

[Remijay]

Well i dont really know how many chapters there will be... The last part is where everything goes down.

 

 

Thank you for your feedback, ((Hugz))

 

Remijay <3

[Anya]

Of course

 

All right...can't wait to read the rest

Edited November 29, 2010 by Anya

[Remijay]

Of course

 

All right...can't wait to read the rest

 

Awww, thanks hun ...At least i have one fan!!!! GO Me!!!

[Anya]

Awww, thanks hun ...At least i have one fan!!!! GO Me!!!

 

 

 

 

 

I'm sure you have more. Lots of people are just too lazy to come here and post....

 

Just don't give up hope and don't stop writing because of it...I know how demotivating it can be

 

 

[Frostina]

Awww, thanks hun ...At least i have one fan!!!! GO Me!!!

 

 

Just One fan?? r u crazy??

 

Well, now u at least have two self proclaimed fans..

 

No seriously, thats simply not true!

 

 

 

I'm sure you have more. Lots of people are just too lazy to come here and post....

 

Just don't give up hope and don't stop writing because of it...I know how demotivating it can be

 

 

 

 

 

 

I agree with Anya you know... People like me are simply lazy!! (or in my case forgetful as i keep reading... and move to the next story)

 

The Interlude's gotten me kinda confused tho... What's happening??

 

Waiting for the next chapter!

 

[Remijay]

Well thnx, that means alot to me and The interlude is a new character, right now im writing it so it probably wont be posted until sunday or monday.

 

The interlude is like the day of the last chapter with Thomas, the one that tells the story, yea so Right now Cyrus is explaining what his day on that day is and how and what happened. Cant really give that much Away, but i know you guys are going to like it.

 

Thanks again!!!!

 

~Have Fun And Live Life~

Not my words, but spoken with truth

[Remijay]

Well after people Commented saying that Interlude One was good, i figured why not finish. So heres Interlude 2 Cyrus and Tom's first encounter.

 

Find out what happens with them, plus we cant forget the other characters Lacey, Keith, and Eric.

 

Oh and also will we ever find out who told Lacey that told Keith about Tom's and Eric's romantic weekend, find out soon. There is more to come!!!!

 

 

https://www.gayauthors.org/efiction/viewstory.php?sid=1751&chapter=8

 

((This is the month of celebrating, don't be greedy, give a little)) Thnx

 

Remijay