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I have a new story up here: https://www.gayauthors.org/story/cassieq/reach

It is called Reach and follows the story of a young boy called Tibial who is about to become an adult, but will have some very tough decisions to make. Comments and questions are always welcome.

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Just posted a review for the opening chapter. Posted Image I wasn't sure what to think when I saw the "alternate earth" tag, but...I think I'm going to like this one. ^_^

 

 

One other tiny little thing I'll mention though (this is more for JC):

 

"As they neared Chad's apartment, Tibial was chatting animatedly about his favorite local teams and who had the best chance of winning the championship that ear."

 

Winning that ear?? As they say when you're shaving...you missed a spot! Posted Image Posted Image

 

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Actually, that slip up was more my fault. That wiley "y" was in the original document, I think I might have accidentally erased it when I posted the story. I'll try to fix it straight away :D Thanks for the review! It is alternate earth, but not too "out there" I hope.

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Oh...hehe. ^_^

 

Yeah, without the seeming "rules" regarding mating, this wouldn't even feel like a "not in this world" kind of story.

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In reply to my review Cassie promised complications from the 'instruction'! Posted Image

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Yes, she did :D

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Chapter 2 is up. Let me know what you think!

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Chapter Three is up. Tibial and Chad both meet a woman. Things are starting to get interesting. :)

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Chapter Four is up. Don't be shy, let me know what you think!

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Chapter Five is posted. Things start heating up!

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Interesting chapter and sort of a sad ending to it. It had some very interesting elements that rather eloquenlty showed the conflicted soul of our protagonist. Good job.

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Tibal's struggles continue, like Daddydavek said, this last chapter had a really sad ending. There is so much going on for Tibal, the baby, Mia, and a love he can't have, I can't help pitying him a bit. Looking forward to more.

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Posted Ch 6. A lot of what was building up in the previous chapter comes to a head here. Let me know what you think!

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My beta hates me. My editor hates me. Will you hate me too? :D Chapter 7 is up!

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Yes, I hate you! JK...but you better have something planned to get Chad and Tib out of this!!! ...or else :whistle:

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Yes, I hate you! JK...but you better have something planned to get Chad and Tib out of this!!! ...or else Posted Image

 

Good. Posted Image And I always have a plan...just sometimes people don't like them Posted Image

 

Oh yeah, and Chapter 8 is up now too.

Edited by CassieQ

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Booooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo...... :thumbdown:

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Chapter 9 is up. What awaits Tibial and Chad? Read on to find out! (And ignore MJ 85 and his booing :P)

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That was waaaaaaaay tooo short! and it didn't answer any questions :pissed: ...You need to go back and write more! Like their verdict...NOW! Please **begs**

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I'll just have to make it louder! Though I'm pretty sure the typed equivalent of that might be a post that gets me in trouble... :P

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Next chapter of Reach is up. Sorry it is so late...I suck :P

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Chapter 10 is up and is a good one. I'm beginning to see the meaning behind the title of the story. Dealing with things as they are is surely going to be a "reach" for Mia as well as Tib and Chad.....not to mention the child on the way!

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So, I love where this is going, atleast now I feel there is hope for the two, even with Mia along it's much better than feeling useless behind a jail cell, expecting death. :) Eagerly awaiting the next chapter, you're awesome CassieQ

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Seems like everyone liked Chapter 10. Thanks Daddydavek and lilansui for commenting with your thoughts Posted Image

 

Chapter 11 is up. My beta wanted to give Chad a spanking after reading this chapter. Do you feel the same? Posted Image

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