CassieQ Posted July 21, 2013 Share Posted July 21, 2013 'What do you want?' A wish reluctantly made, urged on by his little girl, brings Gavin something unexpected. Written for the 2013 Summer Premium Anthology. https://www.gayauthors.org/story/cassieq/savetonight Comments are welcome Link to comment
Daddydavek Posted July 28, 2013 Share Posted July 28, 2013 Thanks for a great story Cassie. Gavin and Aaron's story is made so much more compelling and tender graced by their daughter's love and joy of life. The narration is simply wonderful. I really think this is the best story you have put on the site so far! 1 Link to comment
joann414 Posted July 29, 2013 Share Posted July 29, 2013 Thanks for a great story Cassie. Gavin and Aaron's story is made so much more compelling and tender graced by their daughter's love and joy of life. The narration is simply wonderful. I really think this is the best story you have put on the site so far! I agree Daddy. It made my heart hurt, but a truly beautiful piece of writing. 1 Link to comment
CassieQ Posted August 9, 2013 Author Share Posted August 9, 2013 Thank you both. I'm glad that you both liked it and that it made an impact. This was a difficulty story to write, but the feedback that I have gotten has been wonderful. Link to comment
Former Member Posted September 1, 2013 Share Posted September 1, 2013 This made me cry so hard. I tried to stop them, but it was futile. I think my neighbors must now think I'm crazy because I am suddenly in wracking sobs as I try to do my makeup for dinner. So beautifully written. The emotions were positively heartrendingly beautiful and devastating. Well done, friend! Link to comment
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