Help - Beta Reader Desparately Needed

[alanb]

I'm pulling stuff out of my overloaded brain about some of my past experiences.

 

I'm an experienced writer, but tend to write in a "dialog" style rather than "narritive" style.  I need someone to help me convert my writing into a more approachable story.  So that means my writing tends to be 'choppy.'  I write like I think someone thinks rather than what someone says.

 

It's a compelling story.  That much I know.  And it needs to get told.  But I have to get through the 'gates' to get it posted here rather than some porn site.

 

Looking for all the help I can get.  (An editor wouldn't be out of the question either.) 

 

Chapters 1 and 2 are written.  Chapters 3,4, and 5 are in my head.

 

a.burleson@verizon.net is the easiest way to get back to me

Edited November 11, 2015 by alanb

[Mikiesboy]

I'm pulling stuff out of my overloaded brain about some of my past experiences.

 

I'm an experienced writer, but tend to write in a "dialog" style rather than "narritive" style.  I need someone to help me convert my writing into a more approachable story.  So that means my writing tends to be 'choppy.'  I write like I think someone thinks rather than what someone says.

 

It's a compelling story.  That much I know.  And it needs to get told.  But I have to get through the 'gates' to get it posted here rather than some porn site.

 

Looking for all the help I can get.  (An editor wouldn't be out of the question either.) 

 

Chapters 1 and 2 are written.  Chapters 3,4, and 5 are in my head.

 

a.burleson@verizon.net is the easiest way to get back to me

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