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32 minutes ago, Ivric said:

Thank you for welcoming me.  I have a question.  Are the works within the website copyrights of the authors or the website?

 

1 minute ago, AC Benus said:

Authors :) 

does that include stuff we post in a a forum AC .. maybe Ivric should take author as soon as possible. 

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4 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

 

does that include stuff we post in a a forum AC .. maybe Ivric should take author as soon as possible. 

Yes, nothing wrong with taking the 'Author' status. Not sure about the forum content....I'm not sure about that 

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#Ivric Interesting, truly....Reading the topic title "My Woes" I was expecting a poem but of course not in prose form....Nicely written... please if you don't mind may I ask the meaning of few lines? You see, it keeps bugging me if I don't get the meaning of something!

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On 6/14/2017 at 1:56 AM, Ivric said:

Aspirations of banded fingers, of forever vows, yet adulterous actions left drifts without plows.

I am not sure what banded fingers mean here...

 

On 6/14/2017 at 1:56 AM, Ivric said:

My independence led newly awakened heart away.

This line too...actually I m not sure y independence would lead heart away 

Again sorry, I know m being nosy...and thankz :) 

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@Aviana 'My independence led newly awakened heart away', this line is describing my move from where I went to high school to where I went to college.  In that move my past gave way to my future and the feelings that I held inside for so long could be addressed.  Like so many gay youth, I was reclusive until I left home.  I hope that enlightened the poem a little more.  Thank you again.

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18 hours ago, Ivric said:

@Aviana 'My independence led newly awakened heart away', this line is describing my move from where I went to high school to where I went to college.  In that move my past gave way to my future and the feelings that I held inside for so long could be addressed.  Like so many gay youth, I was reclusive until I left home.  I hope that enlightened the poem a little more.  Thank you again.

Ahhh yes...it did...wow...nicely painted!!

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