New story and looking for assistance

[BWCTwriter]

I am the writer of Boundary Waters Canoe trip, which you can find at Nifty under Gay Male-young friends section, and i'm looking for any and all comments on my newly developing story, and also for some assistance in editing the story. having a second set of eyes to look over my story would be beneficial in terms of catching grammatical errors and the like. take a look at my story here: http://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/young-frien...ers-canoe-trip/

 

and email me at bwctadmin@cox.net with any comments, suggestions

[miguelsanchez55]

Hey Dude,

I still have 1 chapter to read to bring me up to date but you have a good story line. I haven't seen any real errors that jump out at me. As soon as I get caught up, I'll write you.

 

Take care,

Mike :sword: