davewri
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Nothing new here. Quoka's characters are almost all smart mouthed punks. No regard for other peoples feelings is a familiar theme in all of his writings. I read these stories because they are somewhat interesting. Quoka does not write warm and fuzzy love stories.
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Chapters at out of sequence. Still no answer about the accident.
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Seems we missed the whole scene about an accident. Poor Mathew has been disposed of like an old newspaper.
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Could not really be called a cliff hanger when they are sitting on the bottom of the ocean. LOL
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Typical reaction for all of Quoka's stories.
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Once again Quoka has let his main character explode and run off to hide. Mathew was drugged and possibly raped and Anton the person that is supposed to be his partner, hangs up and runs away Never seeks a reason or try to understand anything he just runs away. Leaves his phone behind so that people who do care for him are left to suffer and wonder why. A very overworked and very familiar theme.
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I think it is the author who has issues. The same theme appears in all of his writings.
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"Reporters" don't trash rooms like that. If the old biker gang joined the striking truckers it could get very ugly.
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Happened to me once. Went home with a guy from the bar. Did all the wild and crazy things. About 2:00 he told me I had to leave because his boyfriend he had been fighting with would be coming back home soon. I waited in the parking lot until I saw a guy pull up. I waved and smiled as he passed by.
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Anton quite often makes rash, quick decisions. Does he not understand "due diligence" ?
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Crossing a truck drivers strike could be a problem.
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Anton has a boyfriend, Anton has a boyfriend, Anton has a boyfriend. My have times changed.
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God how I hate hospital waiting rooms. They should hand out sedatives for people waiting.
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Quoka's early writing has a lot of tedious descriptions of every mundane thing in great detail. Have patience it gets better.
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Quokka, you seem to have a problem writing about gay characters. The stories are interesting and I have read them all. This is a gay authors web site after all.
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Still not resolved on the gay issue. Somewhere deep inside the truth will have to come out.
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Typical of Quoka's writing style to show very little love or closeness. I see hugs at the airport all the time. Never too old for a hug.
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Do you still have that copy of the photograph?” More danger coming I bet.
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as I made the journey north on my own. Not a cliff hanger, but a hint of trouble maybe.
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"leaving my laptop, wallet and mobile behind" sounds like trouble in store for a person falling off a cliff.
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Brilliant ideas on moving the yacht. Good luck on a wet phone. It would be a miracle if it works.
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Would it not be easier to simply talk to Sebastian. Flying around the world to avoid someone seems rather extreme. Hope there is a good reason for all of this.
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Why is he so afraid of Sebastian that he would travel halfway around the world to avoid a phone call?
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A rather severe over reaction. I bet Sebastian has words with that captain on how to treat guests on his ship. So far I do like this story and hope Huon and Sebastian meet and work out what ever it is Sebastian is intending. Huon seems very self absorbed about keeping his singing a secret and his reluctance in dealing with Sebastian on a reasonable level.
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About Sara....If something is too good to be true. .... I suspect a tracking device has been placed on board. Simon and Anton will not have a romantic connection. Quokka does not write gay stories.
