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Ashi

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  1. Happy birthday.
  2. Wait, I thought I said happy birthday already. Happy belated!
  3. Thank you Carringtonrj. Those are very kind words.
  4. Thank you Dolores!
  5. Thanks for the review, Bill. Sometimes life is like that. We need light, but sometimes the light blinds us.
  6. Thanks Cia! Yeah, it's playing expectation that MC is a gay guy (maybe he is, or maybe not). Oh, the shoes.... LOL. I know some female photographer friends who wear Converse high top. LOL. Thank you again for the nice insightful review!
  7. Ashi

    Chapter 1

    It is interesting when the boy decided he would live in his fantasy world and forgo his responsibility, he died. Yes, the Perter Pan syndrome, as you put it. Very well written parable.
  8. I usually don't come by this thread, but I just want to tell you guys, happy holiday season. Visit a place you always want to visit. Take a photo of an overlooked dandelion and make a wish. Try to shop for an inexpensive (but good) wine for your neighbor (or keep it for yourself). Smile (or smile back) at a stranger in a mall though you probably won't see him again. I once passed through United Nation Plaza in San Francisco, which is known for its farmer's market and high concentration of homeless people loitering around. Someone set up a booth to pass out curry rice. It didn't specify the reason why foods were given, but I saw many regular folks like me lined up to receive the anonymous benefactor's kindness. I was quite tempted to join the queue, just as a spontaneous act of silliness.
  9. Thank you for your review and your beta reading! I will try to find time to write more.
  10. Thank you for your review, Wildone. I am glad you found one of the devices I put in. There are more things like that in the story. And I must also mention they may or may not be "boyfriends." In the end note I suggest people to read from another gender's POV than the first time you read it.
  11. Thanks, Comicfan!
  12. Thank you Percy. :-) I try not to tell too much, so non-verbal cues are super important to what's going on in their minds. Glad you like the story.
  13. Ashi

    Chapter 1

    The ending sucks! I hate it! But it's very well written, but I hate the ending because it's ARGH! I was expecting Michael to die and Gavin's parents to live through the consequences of moral conscience, but not this! Very good surprise ending, but I hate it! I give it a five-star.
  14. Happy Birthday.
  15. Happy happy birthday, dear Andrea! Oh, how I envy you. I want to go to New Orleans!
  16. Here is the version with visual effect (using Sims 2, it looks like): And here is one I found while searching for the restroom etiquette... And forgive the really crude men humor of this one.
  17. Easiest way to end this misery is tell your friend to take a nose dive and end the friendship.... Having a crush on a straight friend can never have a happy ending....
  18. Yes. Lovely put. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving with people you love. Things can be enjoyable if shared.
  19. Happy Thanksgiving! Many fresh turkeys are gone in the market, but frozen ones are still available. It looks like many people are doing last-minute turkey bake-athon today.
  20. Happy 21st!
  21. Happy, happy birthday!
  22. George Moscone would still be alive, if it wasn't because of Twinkies.
  23. I love Daria.... Maybe because I was like anti-establishment (but I am a conservative anti-establishment). And of course, My So-Called Life. No, I don't own any Power Ranger stuff. I don't own a lot of toys. Usually toys were earned by self-imprisonment in the bathroom and crying. No..., it's too taxing to my health to do that all the time, so I didn't have many toys. I was a computer nerd, so most of my "toys" were computer games.
  24. DISCLAIMER: I was NOT giving advice! I was merely stating the fashion of the time when I was younger. I would never tell people to wear like that again. YIKES! I hated some of those stuff mentioned.
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