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Great sketch of the family relationships!
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The Diagnostics Protocol
andy cannon commented on chris191070's story chapter in The Diagnostics Protocol
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Another great chapter! Two observations--- 1) Rylee is a nasty piece of work. I look forward to Karma making her its bitch (fingers crossed). 2) I am much in NEED of a tree house like that full of books and snacks. If i can find one with some kind of winch and basket affair so my dog can join me, I may not come down for a while.
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A Wolf's Skin, Part One of Two
andy cannon commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in A Wolf's Skin, Part One of Two
A wonderful start to this tale of a loup-garou in the Dordogne. Why do I think the real danger for Master Rowan will be Farmer Labourant ? -
I wonder about Arthur's mental stability. He has a device that helps travel to any era imaginable and a cool traveling companion but he uses it to return to shuffling spread sheets? I'd go back to 2026 just long enuff to leave the boss a snarky note, then capy and I would zip off to sometime much more interesting.
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This has a lot of promise. Not much better than cowboy romance! I look forward to finding out about the mysterious Taggert's past.
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The piazza near San Luigi lay open in the morning light. Men crossed it without slowing. A cart passed along the edge, its wheels steady against the stone. Two women paused near the well to speak, then moved on without turning their heads toward the place where the crowd had once gathered. No one stood at the center. A friar passed beneath the cloister arch and continued across the square. A boy followed him at a distance, carrying a basket. Neither looked toward the worn stones w
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Somber and thought-provoking.
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The chamber had already settled by the time the abbots resumed their places. No summons was given. No call to order was needed. The movement of their return was enough to draw the room into stillness. Benedetto remained where he stood. The archbishop did not speak. Lorenzo did not move. One of the abbots placed his hands upon the table. “We have heard,” he said. No one answered. Another voice followed, not separate, but continuous. “The matters set before
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The looms stood still in the wool quarter. Morning had come and passed without the usual clatter of work. Doors remained half open, but no one crossed their thresholds. Bales lay where they had been set down the night before. The narrow streets, usually choked with carts and runners, were held instead by groups of apprentices who did not move aside. They gathered in knots at the corners and along the lane that led toward the dye houses. Some sat on the low walls with their arms folded.
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The cloister at San Luigi lay open to the mild afternoon, its stone arcade casting long shadows across the worn paving. A small crowd had gathered just beyond the threshold. They stood in loose expectation, their voices low, their attention fixed upon the friar who had drawn them there so often in recent weeks. Fra Benedetto stood beneath the arch, his hands folded within the sleeves of his habit. His expression was composed, almost grave, as though the words he had yet to speak already wei
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The piazza before San Luigi filled early, though no bells had called it. Word had moved faster than sound. By the time Benedetto stepped onto the worn stone and raised his hand, the crowd had already arranged itself into expectation. He spoke without ornament. His voice carried cleanly. He spoke of cities that bent their knees to gold. Of men who counted profit as virtue and called it order. Of households that mistook abundance for blessing. He did not say Florence. A murmur
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Oops! He leaked through from an earlier draft. Now he is properly renamed here, that scoundrel.
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The crowd in front of San Luigi did not disperse when Fra Benedetto finished speaking. It lingered in the piazza, shifting into smaller circles. Some knelt and prayed aloud. Others gathered around those who had stood closest to the sermon, repeating phrases with careful attention, as if they were instructions rather than exhortations. A young man raised his voice. “We are not alone in this. We are called to live rightly together.” Another answered, “The Order must remain fait
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The consequences of Fra Benedetto’s preaching began to show across Florence. Crowds gathered more frequently outside the monastery gates. Apprentices repeated the friar’s words in workshops and along the narrow lanes that led toward the markets. Guild masters heard the phrases with growing irritation. Several complained that young workers had begun questioning the morality of trade and profit as if they had discovered truths their elders had ignored. At first the arguments remained con
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The porter, who had been leaning against the wall beside the gate, straightened as he saw the friar approach. Beyond the threshold a cluster of people had gathered in the narrow lane. They were not merchants or patrons. A boy in a leather apron stood near the front, his hands still dark with dye. Behind him a woman wrapped in a worn shawl held a child against her hip. Two laborers waited beside her, their shoulders stooped with the fatigue of the day’s work. A pair of apprentices linge
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Matteo and Gianluca did not walk at the center of the street. They kept to the side, cloaks drawn close, their pace unhurried enough not to attract notice. The morning had warmed, but the air carried a brittle edge. Florence was awake but not settled. Voices rose and fell without rhythm. Laughter came too quickly and ended too sharply. Doors opened and shut with more force than required. Near the market square a cluster of apprentices stood beside a fountain, sleeves rolled and ha
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Before dawn the monastary lay in a depth of silence that felt almost suspended, as if the city itself had not yet chosen to breathe. Fra Benedetto sat at a narrow table beside the chapel wall. A single candle burned low, its flame steady in the still air. He had not come to pray. The prayers had been said hours before. What remained required ink. He wrote slowly, not in agitation but in concentration. The earlier drafts lay stacked at his elbow, pages dense with crossings out. Those se
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The study was lit only by the hearth. The logs had settled into a red, breathing glow, and the light moved unevenly across shelves, ledgers, and the polished arms of Matteo’s chair. Beyond the door the house lay in strained quiet, broken now and then by the soft tread of servants above and the faint shifting of boards. Matteo listened for a repeat of his wife's cry from above. The fire caught the edge of his cheekbone and left the rest of his face in shadow. Gianluca sat beside him, c
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The church near the market filled before the bells had finished their peal. Word had spread quickly. Some came from curiosity, some from conviction, some because it had become difficult to ignore the name of Fra Benedetto. He stood before them without ornament. The stone behind him was bare. The light from the high windows fell without warmth. He did not raise his voice at first. He let the quiet gather. He did not speak as a reformer correcting minor errors, but as a conscience long n
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The study was narrow and high-ceilinged, its windows admitting a tempered winter light that silvered the edges of ledgers and maps. The doors were closed. The noise of the street reached them only as a distant murmur. In the hearth, the fire had settled to coals. Lorenzo de' Medici stood near the table rather than sitting, one hand resting on an unopened folio. He did not invite Matteo to take wine. Matteo remained upright and composed. He gave his account plainly. Gianluca had been broug
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Lauretta watched Gianluca closely. She asked no questions. Her voice was even as she directed the household. A room was prepared. The fire was laid. Warm water was to be brought upstairs, not hurried, not delayed. After a moment she dismissed the servants. The sound of their footsteps faded down the corridor. Doors were closed with care. The house seemed to draw in around them, the ordinary sounds of the street muffled, the air settling into quiet. Gianluca swayed. It was no
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The palazzino was quiet in the hour before dawn, the kind of quiet that suggested intent, not rest. Matteo closed the door behind him without calling for servants. He moved through the passage with his cloak folded over one arm, careful not to let it brush the walls. His steps were measured, precise. He had the sensation of crossing a threshold that would not permit return. At the foot of the stair, a figure detached itself from the shadow. Danilo stepped forward with a grin that
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The city knew before the gates opened. The bells began first, not in the careful sequence of prayer but in full voice, overlapping and unruly. They rang from Santa Maria del Fiore, from San Lorenzo, from smaller churches that answered out of sheer excitement. Sound spilled down the streets ahead of the news; shutters flew open as if pulled by the same hand. By the time Lorenzo entered Florence, the city had already surged to meet him. Banners hung from windows and balconies, Medic
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The fast began with order. In the first week, Gianluca woke to the bell before dawn and knelt on the cold stone floor as the light at the narrow window shifted from black to gray. Prayer followed a fixed sequence. Bread came once a day, measured and dry, and water at set hours. Benedetto appeared often, sitting across from him with an open book, asking him to reflect on familiar texts. “What do you notice when hunger enters,” Benedetto asked. “That it distracts,” Gianluca replied.
