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Typical Bavarian Breakfast
andy cannon commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Typical Bavarian Breakfast
I am quite miffed that I was unaware of the off-the-menu breakfast options for a Bayerisches Frühstück when I was in Munich. That shall be addressed on my next trip. -
Really beautiful writing.
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Such an intriguing story!
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Not so much 'living' as 'existing'. The family might as well say, 'We only keep you around to harvest your organs in case one of the children we really love need them.'
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VIII. You can’t run from your problems
andy cannon commented on CryingCircusConductor's story chapter in VIII. You can’t run from your problems
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The journey to 31st December 1973
andy cannon commented on Gary L's story chapter in The journey to 31st December 1973
A great start to another story set in a troubled time in Spain's history. Gerardo has his hands full with Ximo, I suspect. -
V. You look different
andy cannon commented on CryingCircusConductor's story chapter in V. You look different
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Tough chapter to read.
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Wonderful! I am looking forward to the next few weeks’ reading .
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The tension is mounting!!!
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Great story, Thank you for sharing it.
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IV. Unpacking emotional baggage
andy cannon commented on CryingCircusConductor's story chapter in IV. Unpacking emotional baggage
Another great chapter. I love the interplay between Nico and Logan. . -
Very hot shower scene! Loving this!
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Another great chapter! This cat and mouse game between Brett and Colt is intriguing.
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A clever, witty tale told by a master story-teller. Bravo!
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III. Crossing swords
andy cannon commented on CryingCircusConductor's story chapter in III. Crossing swords
[I'll try not to kiss you] Logan added. Nico read that again. Then again. Uhhh… [kill you] quickly came in after. Oh. [fucking autocorrect]. HATE it when that happens!!! -
I pondered a bit when Marc referred to the 'running group'... could two runners constitute a group? Then I factored in the pacing horse, "Unresolved Sexual Tension" and concluded that three's a group.
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Simmering along nicely. Very slow burn, and those often lead to the more spectacular eruptions.
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Great start! Brings back memories of my time in Munich, but I sincerely hope that this "running as foreplay" doesn't catch on. My knees couldn't keep up with my libido.
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Wonderful world building.
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Really exciting stuff!
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Aha! The list of suspects is growing!
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Parted at the start of a terribly brutal war. What's to come for Cecil and Hudson?
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Another great chapter. Drama and tension a-plenty!
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Great opening chapter! Fast pace and snappy dialog. I look forward to the next chapter.
