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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I found this charming even though I was confused a little, but still I found it worth reading further. Good Luck Astroguy!
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    Happy Birthday Jwolf!
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Bumblebee's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I'm telling you twice no three times, I like this poem. Well done.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Bumblebee's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I like your second poem posted here. I hope many people read it and review for you. Cause you have lots to offer with your poems and your friendship.
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    Cross the Gaze

    Toast commented on TIMOTHYtimothy's story chapter in Cross the Gaze

    I loved this, brilliant
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on jian_sierra's story chapter in Chapter 1

    A second change in a perfect world. How that beckons. Because often love fails or we fail. Maybe the fondest of dreams. A very good poem and bittersweet insights.
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    Poem

    Toast commented on Jim_83's story chapter in Poem

    I see the phrase, but I don't won't to spoil others reading it. But it sets the poem in perspective. I would like to hear the whole story. This poem implies.
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    A mind growing up faster than a body?
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    Mindblowing Spell

    Toast commented on AleMaho's story chapter in Mindblowing Spell

    Of the three I like this one the best. Are they meant to be of one piece? They seem to work that way for me.
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    Last Minute Insight

    Toast commented on AleMaho's story chapter in Last Minute Insight

    Desperation and sadness and a final sleep. But often sleep is healing and I hope with the morning the skies are blue and the flowers are straight again.
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    January's Lust

    Toast commented on AleMaho's story chapter in January's Lust

    Is this a fear of love, that intimacy once achieved ends lust?
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on jian_sierra's story chapter in Chapter 1

    You wrap the most profound emotions in the gentlest of ways. It's marvelous to me.
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    This is the best kind of poem. A very ambitious task, and the care and love and talent and intellect it takes to do this makes me stop and think of you with awe. I know I will read this poem many times. Will give reps tomorrow, all out atm. A great poem to remember a great love. So many moments told and a life revealed. I cannot say enough how wonderful I think this is.
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    Oh, I like the imaginary. It is a whole mystery in a few lines. It speaks of death and love and love and death in a dance. Very nice. And I like the sound it makes. Wonderful.
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    Goodbye

    Toast commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Goodbye

    I like this. To me it has a whimsical appeal to it. Subtle. But there. It is like a formal announcement printed on the best kind of paper. This is over, our break up is finalized. Life goes go. Politely, we regret. And then I think of the emotion this covers. I like your poem, Delores.
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    Different Lessons

    Toast commented on Krista's story chapter in Different Lessons

    Excellent. A consideration of life and love. Love found and lost. And love found and cherished. Personified in the two men. David You were a man when I met you, Now you're just a boy with dreams, That never will include me. Life lessons are often paid for with hard reality. Aaron I don't care to look foolish, As long as you're the one laughing. And I say I love you. When you're too far away to hear me. Love and wisdom here. I very much enjoyed your poem Krista.
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    For me, this chapter was perfection. The pinnacle of the story so far. If it can get better than this, then WOW!
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    Well done.
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    Chapter 6: Bacon

    Toast commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Chapter 6: Bacon

    This is turning into such a good story. Great chapter.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on VampireMystic's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Enjoyed your first chapter. Can there be a new experience for a vampire. Or is the experience always overwhelming. Does it come down to choice. I like that you have thought about this.
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    PIEGATE

    Toast commented on Nephylim's blog entry in Nephylim's Blog

    Did someone say Pie?
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    Chapter 5: Stars

    Toast commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Chapter 5: Stars

    This was good and I like the direction the story is taking here.
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    You give love.
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    Chapter 13

    Toast commented on Hawkeye's story chapter in Chapter 13

    I can't believe Alex is not going?
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    That is so cute! Kandy Kookie Kie Krocodile Kaptain you really should get to know her first.
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