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  1. Toast
    I loved chapter 11.
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    I had a great time reading this story. Maybe in the next one we will get to meet Jerry's AI prototype. As good as this was... there seems to be a lot more to come.
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    Yes, I so agree, I so love words too.
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    Space, science, technology were the stars here, the main characters... and I loved them. The adventure. A wonderful read. Thank you.
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    Hamen, I am inexperienced too. I worry about every word I write. The only solution though is to keep writing. LOL
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    Perhaps a good example of (A.) would be... The Old Man and the Sea by Hemingway. Perhaps a good example of (B.) would be... Ullysses by Joyce. Perhaps it is not the style of the writing that matters... it is the quality of the style. A and B above... are funny parodies. I hope I never limit myself to only one kind of read. I hope I never write only one way. With practice, maybe, I will write something good one day. We are expressive and have many and varied ways of sharing. So let us share the abundance of writing.
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    I would definitely be interested in coming to the UK.
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    Cyan was extremely lucky. Enjoyed reading your story.
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    Happy Birthday, Dans La Nuit!
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    Nice hair Band and a cute ear.
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    I didn't just read that.... I sang it! Thanks Dooby!
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    I am so lucky to know you Steve. I have told you before, you write extremely well. Love Sam
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    A great story recalled as a memory of a first meeting. So I wonder about the present and why Max and Evan are on a spaceship. I know why they are together, the story tells me that... Max will always love and protect Evan. Lots of questions. Did Max seek Evan out? Thoroughly enjoyed reading this. It held my interest and surprised me. Well written, original. Thank you WL.
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    I agree about Demara, and that line was one of my favorite too.
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    Wonderful story with lots of charm. I completely enjoyed reading it. It's what we all hope for. A place to belong, a home. A life to share. The protection and goodwill we all need. And a heart to love.
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    Okay, I adore Iswirl. Alien or not, I can see why Herk had no trouble accepting Iswirl as a companion and more... someone he would not leave to die alone, even while trying to rescue his sister. And visa versa, I can see why Iswirl would join in on Herk's quest. Really this story has wonderful depth. And finally, I can see why Adam would create such a world. Where one is accepted. A really wonderful story, Graeme, thank you. I think I will think about it for a while.
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    Wishing Tarin A Happy Birthday! And A Great Year Ahead!
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    A very positive story. A pursuit of possibilities. Yielding hearts and open giving. Well crafted and written. Thank you, I enjoyed it very much.
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    I love fantasy and adventure and all the trappings thereof. A good villian and a bad hero. You made my day. Great read. Great story. Great time. Thank you.
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    Wow, you really know how to pull me in. Maybe I should just talk about how well written it is or maybe I should just say I really liked it. Thank you for a great story.
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    A friend is as necessary as a filling meal in more ways than one, for both the men. It is more than giving and receiving graciously, it is need. I enjoyed your story, thank you.
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    Wonderfully well written whimsy. An unknown recipe for a sour romance. Humbert, the bread of life. Love it and thank you.
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    The worst kind of betrayal leaves a wound only the dearest of love can heal. It is the trust and love of a brother in this story that I will remember. Thank you for your story Kevin.
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    Wishing You A Very Happy Birthday! NaperVic!
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    Everybody, It's A Great Day Wish A Happy Birthday To Eddy!
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