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Everything posted by Kileoli
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You really have weird sources of inspiration.:)
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A pink bubble gum spreading across the town, inside smells like artificial strawberry but if it explodes it is going to stick to everyone. But why our dear Ellis is protecting the Hartley's? I thought he didn't like the professor.
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I wonder if Tim comes for the rebound round.
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I started with the first part since I couldn't sleep but I didn't feel like getting out of bed. The second part happened later and it was not planned to be so. It was more like I'm gonna check something quick, which took hours. It's not panic or treading water , it's more like a flood, drowning or a burn.
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It's the inner soul that must work. It's just rituals and outer body feelings or something like that. IDK. If I can't have sex then I don't want to be fused.
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It's getting better and better. A Tain- Charlie -Tyler triangle will be perfect, with Tayler getting the professor's mind and body at the same time.... But the new Chloe is so wrong, I miss the mean sister filming everything. Is there a scene of Morgan and Lilith making out too?
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Logic check: they said they couldn't hear Ben and Tim because they were staring at the laptop, so basically they could see and hear the boys in Ben's room. But then Ben talked to Tim telling him his plan and being a wildcard, so they know the three of them know. What surprise can it be then? And something about the radios, they can pretty much control their phones, track them and everything. So how does it work that they go to their cars, drive or sit or whatever and put their phone in the Faraday bags to use the radios. So technically they know where they are, why nobody comes to film them? And this whole watching thing is real creepy, I do cover the camera of my laptop and we have a shoebox in the dining room that all the phones go there during the night. I thought I was being paranoid...your story is not helping 😅
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So back to the beginning with Theo pushing Jack and Vince away, but this time they are in a creepy setting. Will the ghost of His pack help or do they watch quietly how Theo hurt his mates?
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You should get yourself one, if you don't have. I don't share 😉 As random as this story sounds, it was 80% reality. All thanks to @drsawzall. I'm still sore. 🤐
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If the gas prices keep on going up, they have to do the same. Or take the train then they're back to the snow chapter without snow. Or Liam stays home and becomes a stay home dad.... wait but that was Rick's dream job. And the Prius is a sexy car....
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It's a nice car
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Liam woke with something already there. He didn’t move, not yet, just stayed where he was and let it register—a narrow strip of warmth along his arm, not quite pressure, but enough that it didn’t belong to him. He kept his eyes closed. Behind him, Rick was asleep. Liam knew it before he checked, but he listened anyway, following the rhythm of his breathing, the way it dragged slightly at the edges, slower than when he was awake, unguarded, without the small adjustments Rick made w
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So that's the solution, Taine needs to visit Orel. I can totally understand why the demons fear Orel. I'm just trying to imagine how Orel applies his systems to magical circles. Scaaaarrrryyy😅
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Then you should write a story about your fancy oven and the small appliances ( I wonder how they can be used in a story)
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I know 🤣 but @Topher Lydondiscussed in Orel's story that the sausage was not to be replaced with any vegetables. So, now I'm confused. Im going to compare things with vagan sausages, should I compare length or width?
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This was confusingly hilarious. It will be very complicated to undo it. What happened to the sausage protocol? You had the Deliveroo boy there and Charlie took the cucumber for the comparison? I thought the sausage was non- negotiable.
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Ben knows what Time doing, the GM knows that Ben knows, so in the end Ben is the one playing with fire. If the pieces play well, they might become archivists, if archivists play well they might become GM, and who's the president snow here?
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That was a nice twist. Gabriel must stay away from Sean or he messes up his whole mission
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From what you said, then you had good parents. Children see the world differently, of course parents are responsible to give them the right devices for the future, the most important things are not materialistic things, as long as they feel safe and loved they're fine. Thing is kids really don't care about the newest switch games or sneakers. It's the adults definition of feeling good or important. However there are two things I learned over the years. People get used to their surroundings, if most people have only bread to eat or can hardly afford things, then it's the reality and actually people accept it easier. If most people have fancy stuff, then that's the reality, although they probably want to have more. The more one has, the more they want. The second thing, many of the things we have, we don't really need them, so I try hard not to buy the kids every new thing that they want and see, saying I didn't have it as a kid so they should have, rather to ask themselves if they really need it, is it really worth having it considering the environmental, social .... effect. And I can claim we've done a good job, they discuss with other kids to pick up their rubbish, save their money to buy a house or pay for toys they badly want, and pack an extra sandwich to take for a friend because the parents have no time to give the kid healthy food. T even pays attention to Nutriscore ( nutrition score A-E) and advises others to eat healthy. 😅 PS: I have however my own lego collection, I didn't have it as a kid and I need it as an older kid now, oh and I have my collection of expensive shoes 😅
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All went wrong as in every thing went right? It functioned so easily so it could just go wrong, right? Was it me or was it intentional that the beginning seemed like the repetition of previous chapter to show the chaos?
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Its good to have surprises, but my phone says you posted on 21.03 and I read it on Saturday, so if I think you are somewhere on the other side, then it should be Friday. It just doesn't make sense unless you have some time machine
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Such a twist, and it's always someone you know. The question is if Sean has to entertain the senator's daughter and friends, does he get to entertain Gabriel again? And are Fridays your new posting schedule?!
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Why nobody asked about Charlie's whereabouts during crystal shopping? And how can Lilith be at the dinner and the ritual?
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This is absolutely crazy. I'm so mad I don't want to read the story anymore. On the other hand I want to see them burn. I put your name as a potential piece for their future games. Violent is the answer 😉
