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Kileoli

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  1. Kileoli

    Chapter 2

    So are we dealing with rats or warriors waiting to kill? I wonder what happens if I nicely ask @Topher Lydonfor a dinosaur story?!
  2. Kileoli

    Chapter 9

    It's always good to have a demon/demons on your side. Edgar is definitely not done considering we're still on ch9 unless someone makes Kebab out of that not Vegan plant.
  3. Wait, did I accidentally send you my notes to part 2 or why are suggesting Liam to drink? He tried Absinthe 80%, one of his worse decisions ever, that thing was horrible to drink and causes hours of headache. I think everyone has a collection of things they can't let go, it's part of us and defines us. I have a box full of baby stuff attached to crazy memories, we gave away almost all baby stuff but not those in my treasure box, it's stupid but I like to have something to show the kids when they are older. There is actually a part 2 and 3 since the Aussie (ex-boy) friend was here for four days, I have the notes and plots but it probably gets boring. Although it never gets boring for Rick and his other allies to annoy Liam, I guess he's just so naive and easy to piss off. On your way, ( I gotta find something in English or translate one). It's not really complicated, it just takes soooo much time.
  4. Kileoli

    Illusive

    You might write a story with/for @chris191070
  5. Kileoli

    Chapter 1

    I like them and Val. I want a sword too, you know the light expensive one... Or any other sword will do.
  6. Medovik, my nightmare cake. All in all, it was a nice visit from my Aussie guy and now my English is promoted from German-English to Australian-German-English. Zat ist very good, oder?
  7. The platform held a mild, uneven warmth, the kind that gathered in patches where the sun broke through moving clouds and then disappeared again when the light shifted. The concrete was dry but not yet fully heated, still carrying a faint memory of the morning chill, so that standing still long enough let the cold creep back up through the soles. A wind moved along the tracks in steady intervals, not strong enough to be disruptive but persistent, slipping between bodies, catching at loose fabric,
  8. Kileoli

    Chapter 8

    Taine has really sort his head, at least he got some extra material to sort thanks Pip's show. But if Pip keeps on being close to Simon, Lynix has little Chance to enjoy the new boyfriend.
  9. So. Some sort of happy ending/ happy farewell. Matty got his boy and Alex got his boys, so if any following season comes probably Alex adds more to his boy collection.
  10. Kileoli

    Illusive

    I have a feeling we're dealing with Gabriel's twin brother from Homeland.
  11. Kileoli

    Illusive

    You've done a good job. Im just wondering how Gabriel is saying goodbye to Sean without making more chaos.
  12. Kileoli

    Congress

    I can understand, then maybe I bother you to confess the plot for the other two books after you're done with posting this one
  13. Kileoli

    Congress

    Guess you gotta write an extra prologue just for Chris 😂
  14. Kileoli

    Chapter 7

    Pip and Lynix? They could have sorta worked but they have different vibes. I'm glad it didn't. Lynix is a lot happier with Simon and his teacups. So Edgar is some kind of meat demon?
  15. Kileoli

    Chapter 6

    Finally Charlie found something for himself and his mom is the best. I'm not sure Mr. Ellis likes her much.
  16. Kileoli

    Chapter 5

    Here I go. I even found the flowers from Gareth 😎
  17. Kileoli

    Chapter 5

    This is getting weirder and weirder. Matt is the best, who knew he was into a foursome,but then he was fine with Lynix. Speaking of Tofu, I have a package of bio Tofu in the fridge, which goes well with the broccoli from last week and I wonder if I still have my vegan cheese....ok I go cook.
  18. Kileoli

    Chapter 4

    I like Tyler, but he's getting too good, too booooring, acting like he knows what Taine needs and always being there. I would have filed 10 times for a divorce if I had a partner like that....except they can't, they're not married yet.
  19. Kileoli

    Chapter 3

    I feel im existing aggressively while lost and a baby Cecil? Oh no, there's nothing worse than a cursed diaper and sleepless night. I guess I'm too traumatized to read about baby eternal living humanoids
  20. Kileoli

    Chapter 2

    You're horribly awesome, I'm not gonna look at red pens the same again.
  21. Kileoli

    Chapter 1

    I thought the German Tax and bureaucracy was bad, but I'm wondering what they do in Warwick that it turned out so in your story. I'm looking forward to Charlie's and Taylor's fight over Taine or we should start a Champaign #boyfriend4charlie. But honestly I can't imagine Taine in Florida.
  22. Kileoli

    Congress

    What? They have their own story? Then please write them! I have more cookies and I'm behaving 🍪🍪🍪 first, before I get out and haunt/ hunt you! Hhhmmm since they are private I don't want to know you suck on what/ at what?!? But Scott is a nice side character you created and he has a high potential in helping Gabriel, besides he takes interesting photos so Sean+Gabriel might want to be photographed by him for the invitation to their wedding 😂😉
  23. Kileoli

    Congress

    That's a lot of action, thinking about it we haven't heard of the senator at all
  24. Kileoli

    Congress

    I really liked the part about Michael, you did a good job showing his inner struggle to accept himself and what he was raised with. And thanks goodness he didn't do anything stupid and was so rational. You also get an extra 🍪 for not doing anything to Scott. Gabriel needs him. BTW who's Chris? Did I miss him?😱 Or is it DJ?
  25. Kileoli

    Congress

    So 9 to go, but if you keep on adding more sex scenes ( or did you lie about having no time for the sex anymore?!) then it's gonna be more than 22 chapters, just saying.
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