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  1. Kileoli
    The question is what will Alex do with Jake. It didn't seem he was sorry about his relationship with him.
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    They are monsters in disguise pushing the boundaries of their parents, still they are cute enough to survive the wrath. 😅
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    Now I know what you meant with the drama. That was very mean of Brad commenting on Lyn's mom, then he thought Alexander bought him some how. I think the mistake was in telling the drunk Brad about his love. If this is when Lyn stopped seeing both of them, it's pretty weird Alexander didn't try to find Lyn later, not even after his divorce. The same is true about Brad or did he tried and Lyn ignored him for 8 years?
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    Liam woke slowly, which was unusual. Normally, waking was an event—noise, light, responsibility arriving all at once. This time it came in pieces: warmth first, then weight, then sensation. Rick was behind him. Not looming. Not pressing. Just there—solid, familiar, close enough that Liam could feel the steady rhythm of his breathing against his back. One arm was draped loosely over Liam’s waist, hand resting where it had clearly decided to stay. Rick’s fingers traced small, absent-minded patte
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    Apostasy

    Kileoli commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Apostasy

    There are some new crazy people grouped as a band, then there's Gabriel who messed up his last assignment, and now an almost dead senator, it got pretty wild. But I thought Gabriel was better than that, failing is death in his line of work anyway. So what is Protocol two? Is it like plan B?
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    Semi-Final Day.

    Kileoli commented on William King's story chapter in Semi-Final Day.

    Are any relationships ever simple? I cannot trust Jake anyway. 😁
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    Semi-Final Day.

    Kileoli commented on William King's story chapter in Semi-Final Day.

    Ok, this is getting messy and sorta unfair to both Matty and Jake
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    Well unfortunately there are no cameras installed in their bedroom (yet), I guess I would stay with the "teen" label for this story but Liam is a wild card and as much as he complains he is open to possibilities.
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    Chapter 1: Cold?

    Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 1: Cold?

    That's so true.😁 Im not sure if the questions will be answered though.😗
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    Erroneous

    Kileoli commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Erroneous

    There will be more to the cast? That's great. For me psychopath is a positive thing when it comes to stories with the almost main character being negatively crazy. The word reminds me of the anime series psycho pass I watched as a teenager. So, let's see how Gabriel and Co shape the story.
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    Erroneous

    Kileoli commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Erroneous

    So what do we have here, a psychopath who drives a Tesla, a politician who believes x can help with cyber terrorists, and a data analyst who looks harmless. That looks very wrong to me. 😁 So let's see what comes next.
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    Oh, that would have been real bad for Liam. He would have ended homeless, hopeless, jobless and loveless, I guess. So, he's lucky he's not dating you in real life 😁😅 But Rick is not perfect, he just makes it seems so. For the snow story, I have one written chapter to edit and the end chapter to write. I may take the two to another story, they turned out funnier than I originally planned.
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    Chapter 1: Cold?

    Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 1: Cold?

    Thanks, it was the best comment I could get right now. It really made my day. At least I can imagine I'm good at procrastinating and might be able to write a story. The idea came from what happened in real life with a bit of exaggeration ( except the train situation since in reality it is worse)😁 I know Liam sounds batshit crazy, but Rick is the real psycho and can I join the batshit crazy club, if you have one?😅 I hope you are not disappointed with the duo, reading the next chapters.
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    He almost has a PhD in it.
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    That was a great chapter with answering a few questions.why do I have the feeling there comes more drama?😅 I agree with the idea of group therapy. Good job anyway with this chapter.
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    The washing machine announced the end of its cycle with a bright, optimistic chime that did not match Liam’s emotional state. He stood in front of it with his arms crossed, head slightly tilted, as if the appliance might reconsider its choices if he stared at it long enough. Behind the glass door, a dense mass of black fabric clung together in damp solidarity. The clothes were clean in the technical sense—no visible stains, no lingering soap—but they were wet, which rendered them useless fo
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    Unfortunately yes. But he has Rick. Rick has his own own moments too
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    Liam woke at 05:30 because Rick had signed a contract with the alarm. The bedroom light snapped on. Not fully—Rick was not a monster—but enough to communicate intent. “Morning,” Rick said. Liam groaned and pulled the blanket over his head. “Is it so late?” Rick checked his phone. “Yep. Snow’s still coming down. Roads are bad. I’m leaving now, to catch the train.” “Good for you,” Liam muttered into the pillow. Rick leaned over and poked Liam’s shoulder. Not hard. Jus
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    The characters are somehow very exaggerated but that makes them funnier to read. So now who picks where their third date is?
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    Luckily, we have already covered the topic. But I might come to you at some point for tips and brochures 😁 Another question, now that the Josh's story is on the winter break, do we hear more from Sky and Co or will you focus on how to open portals?
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    Ok, Im a bit confused. Here it was like Brad knew Alexander really liked Lyn, and also they were debating if Brad should tell Lyn about his feelings. But then the "Lyn is straight" argument from last time does not make sense, or does it? Is Brad trying to say even if Lyn is straight, let us tell him about our feelings and Alexander said"No"?
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    That was really good, more drama was almost impossible. I really like Sloane and Kenzi. They did a good job. And I can totally imagine me giving a similar talk like Sky and his dad's in a few years. I took notes. 😅
  23. Kileoli
    No some people make it their mission to rescue others.
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    JQ-060109

    Kileoli commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in JQ-060109

    So that was the end of a beginning. You gave us enough information that could have been enough if only Caleb has behaved himself. Thanks for the story. It was a crazy thing at the end
  25. Kileoli
    The median has a great influence especially on younger people, the question is how long it takes AI to take over or can we believe it's just a horror futuristic story?
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