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    Chapter 2: Stuck

    Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 2: Stuck

    I can totally understand your socks, they just keep on landing at places. 😁 Socks everywhere is a no go for Rick, but other than that he has a stronger logic and calmness to encounter the world. Liam tries his best but there are things that really push him to the limits of his world. The truth is I got many inspirations from our daily life. I'm not as extreme as Liam, but I can claim my partner overdoes Rick at times. 😅
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    The roads were worse than Liam feared. Cars moved in slow, shuddering lines. A truck ahead spun its wheels and went nowhere, an enormous beast trapped by physics. Liam pressed the nonexistent brake pedal and glared at Rick. Rick grabbed the steering wheel with both hands just to make Liam feel better. “Holding your backpack hard will not help in an accident, or pressing the ‘air’ brake,” Rick said. “I’m doing all I can, unlike you” Liam snapped. Rick laughed softly. “Thanks f
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    By the time Benedict set his guitar back into its case, his hands were still vibrating in a way that had nothing to do with nerves and everything to do with release. The last chord lingered in his fingers like a memory that refused to file itself away properly, a low hum beneath the skin that made him feel both lighter and oddly dislocated, as if he had briefly stepped outside himself and not quite made it back in yet. Backstage—or what passed for backstage, a narrow corridor that smelled o
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    Chapter 1: Cold?

    Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 1: Cold?

    Then I hope you survive the storm. There will definitely be a storm episode, but I'll wait to see how things develop so it gets probably posted in 2-3 days. Besides since my lazy muse is back, I gotta let him work a bit before he starts dreaming again.
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    Chapter 1: Cold?

    Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 1: Cold?

    It's nice that it worked ....but when was it? Because Liam and Rick had that problem yesterday 😁
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    Today I finished the story and it sorta turned out less crime and more drama in the end. I must think of some changes otherwise I don't know what really comes out
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    Chapter 1: Cold?

    Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 1: Cold?

    Because that's totally me. I'm glad it worked. I wrote it as a short story covering the whole day but it got too long so I decided maybe there's more to them. And that's definitely a skill to be appreciated if you can sleep like that. 😁 I had my inspiration definitely from someone with that talent.
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    Liam woke before the alarm in the way he always did on important mornings, which was to say: with the exact sensation of something going wrong somewhere, and the certainty that it would become his problem by breakfast. The bedroom was black and cold. Not poetically cold—just the pragmatic, resentful cold of someone's decision against heating the bedroom. Liam lay still, listening. The building made its usual noises: the cat snoring, a neighbor banging the door, wind pressing itself against
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    When the whole world turns white and no one is prepared, may be it's just better to turn in bed , pull up the blanket and pretend there's no such thing. Or this is at least what Liam tried before everything went wrong. Warning: Although the whole plot, jokes, scenes and thoughts are mine, I used a lot of help from AI. I might go through the whole story and rewrite it myself for now my apologies.
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    After going slow all the time suddenly the house crumbled into ashes....
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    Access Granted

    Kileoli commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Access Granted

    Finally some answers or action. Thanks I couldn't decide if the whole rebooting was the same as my laptop rebooting the first thing in the morning and has not finished updating after the third coffee, or was it the pacman feeling with the devil system trying to eat Josh. One thing I know is I very much like to be in Josh's position with James and Adam 🙃 Looking forward to the epilogue.
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    Donovan woke the way he woke after nights he preferred to pretend didn’t exist: eyes open before the alarm, brain already moving, body resisting the idea that the day had started without his consent. For a few seconds he lay still and let the room establish itself. The radiator clicked once, then fell quiet. A car passed below; sound softened by wet pavement. The air in the apartment had the metallic, rinsed smell of recent rain and old building dust—neutral, indifferent. He stared at the c
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    Encrypted

    Kileoli commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Encrypted

    Ok, that was one way of returning the memory. So give me the passkey 😇
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    I wonder if I should believe the "cross my heart " part 😁
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    Klebber didn't have it easy, but then it's nice to see Dennis understands and tries his best to catch Klebbers attention the right way. The question is how long Klebb needs to move on and notice Dennis and how long is Dennis going to hide his true identity.
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    Wow, that was so intense but well deserved, and Theo worked hard for his reward
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    That was sorta sweet, Brad needing someone close, but then that explains why he sleeps around Are we getting any close to the point when they all break up?
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    Are they really interconnected?😁
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    Apart from Lyn who sees the world differently, I guess the others pretty much know what they are doing. If Bella knows Brad and Luke well enough, she probably guesses what's going on. So more importantly is what she is hiding and what happened between Lyn and Brad 8 years ago.🤨
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    Good point. Who knows? Does AI have tendency to abuse and kill people? I hope we're not that far. I wasn't aiming for that genre.
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    Benedict Michell lifted his guitar case off the chair with the exaggerated care of a man handling something both precious and mildly accusatory. “Right then,” he told it, as if the instrument had been the one cancelling plans all week. “We’re gaun oot. Behave yerself. Na drama.” Jessy watched from the rug with the concentrated seriousness of a dog supervising a surgical checklist. Her ears were perked, head tilted, tail making a slow, anticipatory sweep against the floor. Benedict
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    That's the question I ask myself when dealing with the outliers in my data, are there error or do they lie there to outstand the model?😁
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    Donovan sat on the edge of the couch with his phone resting in his palm, the screen dark, as if it were waiting for him to make the first mistake. Outside, the city had settled into its late-night register—the hour when sound thinned but didn’t disappear, when sirens were farther apart and laughter carried farther than it should. Rain traced thin, uncertain lines down the window, catching the streetlight just long enough to look intentional before slipping out of shape. His apartment smelle
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    Benedict Michell woke with the feeling of being watched. It was the sort of awareness that slid under the skin before thought had time to form, a quiet certainty rather than a jolt of fear. He didn’t open his eyes at first. There was a warm body pressed against his side, solid breathing, unmistakenly alive, a reassuring presence fitted against him with the unselfconscious certainty of something that belonged there. His first instinct was to lean into it, to steal heat, to pretend for a few more
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    Unseen Hands

    Kileoli commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Unseen Hands

    So as always some guy who knows about classified stuff. Then a system against humanity or people or ...and some biological experiment went wrong.... Still your story keeps me intrigued. If it was some Netflix series, I would have stopped long ago. 😁
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