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Yeah, could you rewrite chapter 18 to only show Clara's perspective? 😜 So much more entertaining 😜 *playing with drown's insecurities off* No. There will be no head hopping. 🙃 I think even with my short hiatus, I wrote and edited many many words in three months. Do you want me to die? 🥲 Damn! Would have been too easy 😅 I think I would break character if things were easy to deduct!

They're also very pretty.

Unfortunately we were not able to bear witness to her trying her best, because Grey was off in the forest doing… things. Yeah, essentially this: 😜 Oh what the… You're so gay XD Grey, kinda explained that before: His brother and father are so furious, they don't seem to have come to the realization that comes with “Ugh. You’re mated to a guy. […]”, even though Luis should be aware of pack politics—if not he, who would? Your deduction is plausible, but you also don't know all of wolf law, @Zuri. You can challenge almost anything, even the Alpha status. Sebastian would never have done that before, he's weaker. Clearly weaker than his brother. And at some point in time (Ch 09), Grey asserted dominance over his father. They might not like it, but Grey and Dave are here now. If they were to challenge Grey and Dave (please stay tuned), knowing what we know, I doubt anyone in the pack would survive. If Luna has her marbles together, she might just be trying to defuse the situation before it gets to such a point. Or does she? Again, please also stay tuned. Apparently, she's finally freed from her husband, at least as her leader as pack politics make her to submit to Grey and Dave instead, whether Luis likes that or not, as must he. So many possibilities. As a reader I would wonder if she was truly happy with the way her other son and her husband treated her first-born son. She's a mother. Knowing what I know, it is hard to comment further XD Just know, all my women are powerful, in more ways than one. So, he has the same taste as Mark: You remembered Mark and Dave share similar tastes. And DNA. There's a whole other subplot I'm leading towards so much, and no one is seeing it yet!!! 💚

She sure did, but she also surprised Grey. He had only been gone from the pack for a few days, but he was imprisoned before for trying to run. Who knows when they last saw each other. You are very perceptive. I like it

💜 Will she? They might have done so in the past, but that was long ago and is not written in history. Why?

The rising sun painted a thin line on the horizon, long shadows stretching across the land. I woke, snuggled against Dave. His steady breaths and soft, sunlit fur lulled me from my sleep. I nestled my snout under his head, feeling his heartbeat quicken against my cheek—his cue that he was waking too. ‘Hey you. Good morning,’ I thought to him through our bond. ‘I could wake up like this forever. You’re so soft,’ Dave replied. ‘Me too.’ He pulled back, gazing at me. ‘Can I watc

No!

Oh I didn't make myself clear then. That's exactly what I would like to happen, too. As I've said before, his supernatural abilities and his duty to his job are two separate things. He should entrust Mike with the supernatural stuff, while keeping their official police business compartmentalization as a whole different topic. 💜

XD Ok then. I'll wait. I actually have quite amazing IOL's in my eyes because of early cataracts at the age of 38. I doubt I'll ever go blind. I see like a cyborg. AND STOP THAT SENTENCE! Have you ever had a partner who worked shifts? Don't tell me you stayed up! That wouldn't be healthy. Yup. I even stayed up until 2am to make him food. Healthy? No. Romantic? Yup. Incurable. I'm really glad when he just left, because I was clinging to a relationship that no longer was. And yes, it wasn't healthy for me either. I learned a lot. Not going to do that anymore. Have a great digital detox vacation!

BEN CALLED! I feel like the moment the Buffy/Angel crossover happened for the first time with a phone call 😂 I love Kage's reaction, haha. This chapter was really nice, and suddenly months went by. The question remains: Will by heart be broken? I also really hope Kage gets to know the other guys.

Pretty sure the corner is enchanted. Like in Harry Potter where Hermione fit everything including the kitchen sink in her little clutch. Maybe scientist Elijah can elaborate on how that works? I'm sure this comment will cement my place in the korner. I love this bit: I—Drown—enjoy having people shred their clothes when shifting. A lot! And this: SEAGULLS! STOP IT NOW!

All the lies will pile up and become inescapable. AHHHH. ‘Nobody must ever know.’ If I read this one more time, a capillary will burst in my eye. Oh no, Mike, why did you say that. He's going to use it as justification to remain secretive… Until Mike finally stumbles onto some supernatural goings-on and it becomes inevitable. Then Mike will say, "What the?" And Jamie will respond, "Well you said you didn't want to know!" 😂 Hurts This chapter is juxtaposing the mounting circumstances and lies with the mundane and very sweet date that Nam and Melanie shared. He has a good life. And I—drown—remain steadfast in my opinion that being truthful to Mike about everything would solve some issues 😛 Thank you, @lawfulneutralmage.

The grey helps me with writing, but yes, only in moderation. If it gets too much, it becomes depressing.

You made me Google Tata tea.

Just a preemptive strike against humanity. I'd be here, at home, and could ignore people! I'm ok though, actually had a quite decent evening paired with some good news. Now spending time with my favorite human. Thank you, Tim 🧡 It's easy to long for things you rarely get, like snow XD Berlin is just … grey right now.

Send some here, I could use the solitude. ❄️💙

Hummm Hummana Hummm.... This makes no sense whatsoever.

Isn't that essentially, what I said? Aside from me assuming, Wepwawet is a reincarnation from an earlier period from which the temple is—not even Wepwawet might be aware of. But this might just as well merely be my imagination running wild. Well now we're getting somewhere. Maybe I misunderstood. Reincarnation is an interesting topic, but something that has not been explored by the characters yet so I will keep my mouth shut. No one told me anything about the kind of sex I was describing in this chapter in school. Literally nothing about it. 0. 🧡

Rectify? No. Justify? Sure why not. Sorry, Mr. teacher, I had to write pornography to make the story believable, give me an A kthx.

FYI, Hayden Christensen was extremely hot in Star Wars (and Jumper) <.< What? No… Wait… What? Think of the wolf and human mind as two separate entities, but growing up together from childhood. They are intertwined, they are one. This is why Grey was so afraid of turning Dave, an adult wolf coming into an adult human is known to cause irreparable harm. People lose themselves forever. They go insane. So far Dave is faring just fine, right? Right?

AHHHHHH what a great way to start into the weekend Thanks, @Bdamdifino 💜 If I had stretched this out for five chapters, I don't think I'd have survived the process. 😂 With gods and wolves and glowing people, I felt the only way to make the scene believable was to make the sex as visceral and detailed as possible. So the readers can feel it. I certainly did while writing. No one complained so far I think, it's just my own insecurities of posting such a thing lol. I'm glad you're hooked on the main storyline :3 I am too. Thank you. Every comment helps and makes me faster at writing. Yeah, it's the detachment. Chronos might imitate English right now, but he surely hasn't mastered any of it. Interpersonal relationships between humans and human-likes is very foreign to me. In this world, gods used to mean something, and people cherished them. Now in 2023 (time of story—it is in fact the night from September 24th to 25th), they are a foreign concept. Prayed to, sure, but with no tangible results, and definitely not "among us". Wepwawet might be a special thing happening right now, and we have to stay tuned to find out why! ❤️💙🧡

😄😁😁 (Thank you so much 💙)

You would never hurt me though.

Hummmm......dinger..... It’s a drsawzall comment. Usually makes me feel dumb for not getting it. XD 💜 Like Jamie feels when RMW does an intellectually superior thing.

THERE ARE NO VAMPIRES IN MY WORLD! I do have dragons though.